More please(:

Well, summer will be here before you know it, so you'll be able to update, soon, hopefully! How about taking Melody to her parents, that way Melody can get fixed up and Roxanne and Zeke can know the truth about what's going on? I love this story so far, please update, soon!

Great chap! I LOVED it! I thought it was really good and eagerly await the next chap! Don't worry no pressure for you to hurry, school is a big part of life! Update when you can and see ya at the next chap!

You captured the emotions well, and your ideas are likable keep up the good work.

I have idea why don't they go back in time of disney worlds like Peter Pan, snow white, or jungle book. Just idea love the story.

It may be a smaller chapter, but it was an epic rescue. I love how Zeke just pushed Roxanne! I couldn't stop laughing. But that took alot of trust, and self control for Roxanne not to completely murder Zeke for doing it. Great chapter, can't wait to read the next one.

this is actually one disney fanfic w/ outside characters that i actually like! OMG! but i really like the concept of the story, and the way it's written. good job!

Great chap! I loved it! Timon and Pumbaa crack me up, they're so funny! I hope u update soon!

"Pull me up!" Laughed my butt off every time I read that! I can't wait to see what happens next

Loving it!

"Clean up on aisle 3!" lol

HA! A dream come true if that happened to me!

I love the store so far. I hope to see a Kingdom Hearts, Toy Story, Up, Tron, Lilo and Stitch, High School Musical or Suite Life of Zack and Cody reference.

This chapter was really good! I liked it! Pinoke is such an innocent kid haha, gotta love him for all his questions though! And yes! Timon and Pumbaa! LOVE those two! Timon, Iago, and Genie are probably my all time favorite characters ever! So, anyway great chap, loved it and I can't wait for more! Hope everyone's okay!

Love it!
It's just one problem after another for Roxanne and Zeke, isn't it?
Awesome job! Update when you can.