I'm you know it looks like Skye is Allen's brother. I hope what I think is true that would be exciting. update sometime soon! Very interesting!

Ahhhh please update amazing story plot!

Is this going to be updated soon? Love the story so far! :D

This is really awesome!

This is very interesting so far, and i like it :)

I really enjoyed this. The concept is different from a lot of the OC stories: for once, the main character is a kid, and he doesn't want to be part of the Order. He also doesn't immediately adopt the Black Order as home. Plus, he's interesting! I like reading about him, and wondering what his Innocence is. So, good luck on the next chapter! I can't wait to read it.

Wonderful describtion and I do like the storyline thus far, keep it up!

Ah, I love seeing Skye again, and I love seeing your writing once more! It's such a treat, it really is. c: The length of the chapter was wonderful, but I did notice the occasional typo, but they were hardly noticeable. (And I'm OCD about it, so don't fret about others seeing them.) I also enjoy the fact that this is very similar to Fallen Angel yet is slightly different. And the title is to die for. :3 On a final note, glad to see that Skye is still the little terror that he always has been. A bit more open about it, it would seem. (Or maybe my memory fails to do justice for him.) As always, I shall eagerly await the next chapter, and I hope you continue to do what ya love!

-PA