Reviews for If the FIRM Wanted Me To Have a Wife
LadyMidnight1973 11/30/12 . chapter 1
You know something.? I could really hear there conversations Lmfao that is scary huh?!
Riabhach 8/28/12 . chapter 6
Fun to get Marella's side too - you have such a way of getting into the characters.
Ms. Anonymous 8/17/12 . chapter 6
Another great installment in your story. Thanks for answering my question about Lauren. Reading this made my day brighter, even though the new day only started an hour ago. Looking forward to more.
kaidiii 8/17/12 . chapter 6
Excellent!Great job! Well done!:):):)
OldSFfan 8/15/12 . chapter 6
Well, all these complicated characters have started from their point of view, and ended up in a happy place. It's taken them long enough!
kaidiii 8/11/12 . chapter 5
Wonderful job! Well done!:):):)
Ms. Anonymous 8/9/12 . chapter 5
Great work on Michael's POV, and thanks for including the balsa wood again. One question though: At the beginning of the story if Dom, String, and Michael were talking and Marella and Caitlin were talking, what was Lauren doing?
OldSFfan 8/8/12 . chapter 5
Michael is so wonderfully verbal, it's fun to be in his head. Remember in the episode when Hawke rescues Ho Minh, Hawke ruefully says that he had said too much (about Ho Minh's mother) and Michael agrees, while pointing out how rare that was. I think you've captured their characters here.
Riabhach 8/7/12 . chapter 5
Ahh - great to read Michael's POV - kinda of brings it all together.
Riabhach 8/7/12 . chapter 4
Very good - loved Caitlin's POV.
VisualIDentificationZeta 8/7/12 . chapter 5
great job! have you ever considered writing JAG fics? :)
jareya 8/2/12 . chapter 4
I really enjoyed reading Cait's perspective - her conversation with Marella was really sweet and honest!
OldSFfan 8/1/12 . chapter 4
Wrapped up nicely. You're busy marrying everybody off. It's fun.
Ms. Anonymous 7/30/12 . chapter 4
Another great POV. Nice touch adding the dinner scene and the extra parts with Maggie and Erin. Looking forward to more stories.
kaidiii 7/30/12 . chapter 4
Wonderful chapters. Well done! Nice moments!:):):)
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