| Reviews for If the FIRM Wanted Me To Have a Wife |
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LadyMidnight1973 11/30/12 . chapter 1You know something.? I could really hear there conversations Lmfao that is scary huh?! |
Riabhach 8/28/12 . chapter 6Fun to get Marella's side too - you have such a way of getting into the characters. |
Ms. Anonymous 8/17/12 . chapter 6 Another great installment in your story. Thanks for answering my question about Lauren. Reading this made my day brighter, even though the new day only started an hour ago. Looking forward to more. |
kaidiii 8/17/12 . chapter 6Excellent!Great job! Well done!:):):) |
OldSFfan 8/15/12 . chapter 6Well, all these complicated characters have started from their point of view, and ended up in a happy place. It's taken them long enough! |
kaidiii 8/11/12 . chapter 5Wonderful job! Well done!:):):) |
Ms. Anonymous 8/9/12 . chapter 5 Great work on Michael's POV, and thanks for including the balsa wood again. One question though: At the beginning of the story if Dom, String, and Michael were talking and Marella and Caitlin were talking, what was Lauren doing? |
OldSFfan 8/8/12 . chapter 5Michael is so wonderfully verbal, it's fun to be in his head. Remember in the episode when Hawke rescues Ho Minh, Hawke ruefully says that he had said too much (about Ho Minh's mother) and Michael agrees, while pointing out how rare that was. I think you've captured their characters here. |
Riabhach 8/7/12 . chapter 5Ahh - great to read Michael's POV - kinda of brings it all together. |
Riabhach 8/7/12 . chapter 4Very good - loved Caitlin's POV. |
VisualIDentificationZeta 8/7/12 . chapter 5great job! have you ever considered writing JAG fics? :) |
jareya 8/2/12 . chapter 4I really enjoyed reading Cait's perspective - her conversation with Marella was really sweet and honest! |
OldSFfan 8/1/12 . chapter 4Wrapped up nicely. You're busy marrying everybody off. It's fun. |
Ms. Anonymous 7/30/12 . chapter 4 Another great POV. Nice touch adding the dinner scene and the extra parts with Maggie and Erin. Looking forward to more stories. |
kaidiii 7/30/12 . chapter 4Wonderful chapters. Well done! Nice moments!:):):) |