i just love that pair really...You should most definitely continue writing!

its really getting interesting.. do continue..

Okay that's better. I see where you are going with this. But it sure did take long though. Anyway good job.

Things are progressing well.

You've stuck to the cannon so far but I can't wait till you make this story your own. I also can't wait till the moments between Yumi and Touko, especially the tension that rose up between them before the end of the anime.

I was also wondering what Sachiko's role is in all this; is she love rival, a friendly ear or something completely different.

Keep up the awesome work, i'll be watching closely

Hum I don't get it. Weren't your intention was not follow cannon too straight? So far it just follow cannon to a T.

I'm really looking forward to this story.

Especially since it features Yumi and Touko as the main characters. I honestly don't believe there are enough of these two and was ecstatic when I saw this story, which is well written and thoroughly engaging.

My Story alert proves my eagerness to continue to read this story as I believe it has great potential. I look forward to this story's continuation.

:D

Having done my own "What If" and changed a single decision, I realize what a large impact it can have 'down stream' to events that took place in the anime and light novels. I look forward to seeing where your "What If" instance takes you and we who are your readers.

Kind Regards,

EJ Daniels

Yay, another YumixTouko story! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Aww, how cute. Touko is adorable, if a bit irritating with her stubbornness at times. Still, she can't beat Sachiko as my favorite character. Sachiko is even more adorable, especially when she's embarrassed.

A few errors I noticed: you wrote "Fuluzawa" instead of "Fukuzawa," at the end there, as well as "seat" instead of "sit".

Overall though, quite an enjoyable read.