THis is an amaZ\ING STORY

The story was good! A few spelling errors here and there but otherwise it was intense and sad. You did a good job, keep it up!

This was a good story! There were a few spelling errors here and there, but otherwise it was well written! It was intense and emotional. Keep up the good work!

Aww this was so sad. I guess this is a realistic approach to the finale. Love Beth's last words with the whole Mick/Gina thingy. And then the whole Beth/Sam thingy. And nice choice of song. Thanks for writing! Hope you continue xP

Hey, that was...no, great would be the wrong word cause it's too sad...but it's good. Really good, though I still don't get what everyone sees in Mick&Gina - but never mind, that's only my crazy brain, so: well done, and I think this could have been it - the start of season two. Hard, sad, realistic.

I hope you keep on writing here!