i am really liking this story, poor darlin' i was thinking that her heart song should be either this is me by demi lovato or bring me to life by evanescence

love this and in my opinion i think darlin' should wind up with libretto

Oh poor Libertto, Memphis is really protective. I was thinking of a female penguin being the one to help darlin try to find her heartsong. While I was thinking that "Naturally" by Selena Gomez came on. Talk about fitting on my blights. Update soon

I really like this story because it is very different compared to the other Happy Feet Fanfics. I like how you include other characters such as Memphis, and Darlin is pretty cool too. Please post more.

Well I like this story, and I'd like to take you up on your offer for using others OCs. In my story "Family Bonds of a Different Kind", I have a penguin named Syrena go off with her true love Zev to a zoo to meet his parents, but they're only chicks, this can be that zoo if you want, but if you choose to use them I suggest you read "Family Bonds of a Different Kind" first. Other than that, wonderful, and I think Darlin' should love Guin, they're cute together!

Hello again!

I'm glad that you are enjoying our reviews, but you could answer them with PM from time to time ... just kidding ... no, seriously

Well, I like the chapter, but I think that you rushed too much... It's shame cause I was expecting a lot more due to the open-final of chapter 2 :/

Still, it's not a bad chapter at all ;) I still like the story :D

Mmmmm... I don't know... that kind of stuff are not asked. You have to decided by yourself, since you are the author.

BUT, if you really wasnt my opinion, I like both Libretto or Guin to be Darlin's mate. Atticus... not really... besides, he is too old for her XD

You decide which of the two ;)

Well, that's all

Read you soon ;)

P/s: Gosh, this was a long review...

I love it :) Please continue!

Ooh, interesting...

Hi again!

Good chapter! With a bit of romance and intrigue, nice conbination ;) And I suppose Memphis didn't learn anything with his last experience

With this new events, this story had a lot more of potential than before. I just don't know what's going to happen now!

You know, after reading and ponderin this, I realized that Darlin is a kind of mix between Mumble and Gloria. She is very wanted (By Libretto, Guin and Atticus, e.g.) even with her lack of heartsong.

Well, that's all.

Read you soon ;)

P/s: I'm still jealous XD

I see a lot of potential in this story. This whole chapter left me with a lot of questions in mind, which is good! ;)

First of all, I want to say: welcome to Happy Feet comunity! Here, there is a lot of readers, but sadly, active authors of this section are very few. So every new one is welcome with joy

Ok, coming back to the fic: It's a good beggining, I gotta admit that the idea of Mumble having a sibling had never crossed my head and it is a very interesting one XD (I'm jealous because I didn't thik it before)

I really wanna now what's going to happen! But don't make this story like if Darlin was exactly like Mumble but being female. You've got a lot of potencial here ;)

Read you soon

KevinBlu