oh, I love stories about team 8 first getting together. This was great! "When his talented finger ceased its work again, the puppy she was currently holding was in her arms." this line seemed redundant to me, though. And make sure to keep to one tense. Don't switch from present to past back to present.

*squee* Awww, how absolutely adorable! Whether as a friendship fic or as a set-up for something more romantic later on, this story is absolutely AH-MAY-ZING! (Did I spell it right? o.o xD) x333!

That was sweet and wonderfully highlighted Kiba's easy-going acceptance.

I finally got to see the latest "Naruto" movie, and with a single exception in which everyone got a solo shot, every scene with Hinata had Kiba right beside her. He kind of was like her Akamaru.

Thank you for your thoughtful story.

Pretty nice. Comfort Zone are exactly what Hinata need. And I don't see Kiba expecting too much, if there any, from Hina. He's just there for her, yet she's kinda forgot. Good story fellow author. Write KibaHina moar.

that was beutiful. i love it. awesome job. :)

AH, what a sweet story. (o_o)