you...killed Wrex, Tali, Liara, Garrus AND EDI!... I... can't believe that you just did that... please tell me this is just what you did with Kaidan... Though James found the bodies and he was nabbed for a bit...

Okay, you've put me into shock...

So jumpy want to know what's happening suh a cliffhanger but the whole chapter was stupendous

I this story is cool. I love the idea of Shepard having a kid. Found only three, this and 2 others. Thanks for the story!

Vega watch out. Kaidan's got his eye on you. I hope for a hilarious confrontation in the future.

And yeah Udina got what he deserved.

I like the connections between the chapters. Using the same phrase but in different contexts is genius!

I feel sorry for poor Butterfly she is stuck in that body. Poor girl. Also poor Shepard, She going to go off to war alone without her family... you also got me thinking if they are going to get stuck in the citadel hmmm

This story is so heart-touching, keep it up and keep this story going strong.

I was just stating the funny part, and I agree Shepard was a little inhuman in the 2nd and 3rd game, that is why I like this story, anyway great job with this story so far

"Voice that could melt her panties." You win for best line of the century! XD Again, another great chapter! I've so enjoyed this ride!

Oh god! i just got the image of Kaidan whacking James over the head for oggling his little princess. I need to stop laughing.
Jack and Miranada working together seems so likely when Butterfly's involved.
Though i'm sad that now one of their daughters is dead and the other with Cerebus.
'His voice always turned her on. Perhaps she ought to drag him to her cabin and have her wicked way with him, ASAP.
Jack and Miranda coughed in harmony. Shepard felt her cheeks turn red.
Damn. Was it that obvious?' Nice to know Shepard's got her priorities right.

...and then Trishata96 passed out from happiness...
Oh god, what is James going to think when he realises that he been checking out Shepard's daughter, who he didn't trust and was only 2 a few months ago?
I love the Mako ref.
Thank you for not killing Kaidan.

Wow hit by a reaper beam, knocked around by kai leng, and tearing through hoards of enemy soldiers, not even phased in the game, but seeing her daughter all grown up and she passes out on the spot, how Ironic

Please say that didn't age her because I know that would devastate Shepard if whatever I hope they find each other soon

... oh dear lord... have they accelerated her aging? or did they find one of the other women who were made surrogate mothers?
Note to author, please, please make TIM and Archane suffer, plz!
(paces room waiting for next chapter)

Why can i see James regretting the "that ass is hot" comment if Atma does turn out to be butterfly?

NOOO! Not Kaidan! Jack... Grunt... Oh god i'm gonna be crying for the rest of the day.
You may want to start running from the Shenko lynch mob btw.