Wish there was more! Great!

I think they are underestimating McCormick! I always loved Hardcastle's line: "San Rio or San Quentin" then the next thing you see is a plane. Guess we know what McCormick chose, but he's right might have did them both a favor by choosing San Quentin!

I liked Abby and hoped to see more of her in the show, so enjoyed the story greatly.

These short stories and snippets are great. And you capture the characters so well. Whatadonkey, whatadonkey... LOL

This is a scene I would have liked to have seen!

Well done! :)

I enjoyed this story; it's very action-packed. It underlines McCormick's resourcefulness. I must add that you're quite a creative writer, and I can't wait to see what your takes would be of some of the second and third season's more dramatic episodes.