That was so sad.TT SA2 was had one of the sadest game ending. Nice work.

So sad and cool *favs*

Leave me alone to my pathetic crying*is now crying loudly*
Shadow:so nice. Maria...

o_o ...You're the one who wrote this? I read this before I had an account! ^_^
Poor Shadow... It's original, though. I like it! Very sweet, very poetic... Nice. I don't think I can say much else... except the 'Ah! Oh, it hurts' line sound a little awkward to me, but I think it's just a poetic touch, am I correct?
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...I'm really sorry about this, but can I respond to your review? Your email isn't displayed, so... (Well, neither is mine, but only because of evil threatning people who seem to like me... o_o To make it up to you... I don't know, you name it) First off, thanks for the critque!! I almost never get critques! YAY!
Thank you for the word 'flashes'! Yeah, that sounds odd... I know lightning doesn't clap, but I was trying to find another word to suit it besides strike and couldn't think of one... x_x
Thank you for noticing the half quotes! I think you're probably the first to notice that! I wrote it that way because Saturnine (the young hedgehog) isn't really talking. I meant to make it look kind of like she was thinking it all, being that everything she says is supposed to be in italics, but my italics won't upload!! >_< Evil uploader... That's also why the last line ends the way it does... You'll see why in later chapters. ^_^
I know that two people don't speak in the same paragraph... (I'm usually the one telling people that, actually XD) I have to fix that...
You're right... Dripping is a better word...
For the dress quote, I kind of like it the way it is... -_- I don't know why, I just do... ._. Weird...
I'll have to change, the thing about the quills and spines, I have to fix that, too... And last but not least, I put the comma and not 'and' for poetic reasons, but a semicolon might be better...
-Videociraptor

this story is very touchy, i like it, it makes me... sad, this story is good, oh but one thing... SHADOW IS STILL ALIVE, HE IS THE ULTIMATE LIFE FORM, SHADOW LIVES ON , HE HAS TO, THIS IS A START OF A NEW CHARACTER. SHADOW, SHADOW, SHADOW, but i still think the story is good, but shadow is still alive, i know it he's the best.

;_;WAH!! that was beautiful.

Hi Jaime. Patrick here. This is good. I can just imagine being Shadow, lying there in the forest. I like the part about how the butterfly decided his nose had no nectar. It was kinda funny, but I don't know wether or not you meant to make it funny. But anyway, I feel like I can relate to the story, and that's rare to me.

What a great poem/story Jamie you need to post again your presence is needed.

Wow, this is great! ^^ So touching...
(BTW, this is RabbitsRule4/Laurie... *Was too lazy to sign in* ^^; )

Hey Spark, this fic was GREAT! Keep up the good work, okay!?

SonicFrank: Long live the Blue Hedgehog

Aww.. that was so sweet, and sad. And a good question about how much a butterfly knows :p Glad that he found some peace, anyway..

YAY! Short but sweet. SHADOW LIVES ON!!!

Aww...
Sweet...sort o'...

I like!

Sigh. Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

sniff so sad!