I have too much catching up to do, just got out of the hospital. ( minor surgery, nothing serious) Can't believe how many stories you've written. This one was absolutely outstanding and I think one of your best. It was a major roller coaster ride. Well done!

What a train ride on these last five chapters! A very satisfying and canon-esque ending. You did a wonderful job with this story. I think it's one of your best.

I thought the last chapter was exciting? Brilliant battle between Illya, Aries and the storm battered boat. Thank goodness Napoleon came to his rescue.

Loved the bit about the sharks and the underwater images, and then to lose Nate? I was very upset and then you put Napoleon in jeopardy. My heart is racing!

What a bad guy, he's really one you can detest. This chapter has us teetering on the edge, wondering what's going to go down next. I feel like it won't be good.

I liked this story very much, there were a lot of memorable images and characters in it. Gilles was chilling and the control he had over the three women was frightening. Your action scenes and visuals were outstanding. Thanks for a great read.

Not one to comment, but this was an outstanding story.

What a heart warming turned edge of your seat story. I think one of your best AU stories to day.

Things are building quickly and now a hurricane on top of it all? Like Illya going at it and putting his foot down about Elliott becoming involved, and for once she doesn't fight him on it. Pretty good, considering what a stubborn person she is.

Another well written chapter, leading us through what they need to do, as well as their building concerns for Elliott and Anita. Thank you for not leaving us hanging on that.

Great underwater diving scene with Illya, I could see it all. The concern is building about the ladies, and what's happening in Hamilton. Great chapter.

The bit on the boat about the dramamine and the speedos was priceless, contrasting that with a very unexpected twist, putting Elliott and Anita in harms way. That was a surprise!

Wow what a picture you paint of De lossier and his crew, I hate them already. Nice images of Elliott and Anita bonding, and of course Elliott suspects something is going on. She's a sharp one.

Conspiracies afoot, as is the game. The last line is too funny.

I was only going to read a few chapters at a time, but couldn't help myself as this story was so riveting. This is, I think, to date, one of your best stories. You did an outstanding job with the characters, setting, dialogue, action scenes and building the tension, as well as presenting a logical and well thought out plot.

Gillies De Lossier and hid grey ladies ( and Aries too) were possibly your best villains and villanesses.
I can't wait to catch up with your other stories, and I see you've ventured into the world of NCIS.

Your writing continues to impress me, and I can see strong growth and improvement. Keep up the great work.