HOORAY! Yeah, yeah, yeah, a happy finale! I love this fic. Nobody is dead, Derek and Angie are couple... Is very beautiful. Thank you very much, please continue writting, I LOVE YOU FOREVER, I AM YOUR ADMIRER, YOUR CRAZY FAN, ha ha ha, see you later, Storm Uchiha!

DEREK IS A MERMAID?! I... I'm... Surprised... Derek is abandoning to Angie? Please, NOOOOOO! Not my hero, please! He, he, he, ok, is your fic... Is cool! Or like say Dr. Adel Tulba: AMAZING!

This is a suspenseful chapter, however I have to note these things. Several incorrect words were used (Eg it is affected, not effected). Dr. Stiles, the conquerer of GUILT, NEVER EVER EVER would leave symptoms brushed aside for any period of time. You also have random bits of italic code lying around. Not your best chapter, but still a good one.

Wow... I really love this story! I've read them all even though I'm on chapter 1. It's great )

Pretty fair intro. Curious to see how this'll progress.