Thanks for sharing. You can't just stop there! Sequel, sequel, sequel, he chants loudly!

Dont end it!

It's nice that Chuck's dad is still around now that Ellie is gone.

It's always a good day when Shaw dies. Interesting revelation that Sarah left him. You didn't give us Chuck's reaction to that news, other than his comment to Shaw, which was probably just to instigate him to do something rash.

What? Sarah's a stripper? On a mission or...?

Well it looks like you got rid of Shaw in the most warm of fashions. Should we call this chapter"Skinny dipping with Shaw."

Finally, the wheel turns full circle, what can you say at this point though? Should be interesting with what you come up with next. Will look forward to your next update with real interest.

I loved this chapter. You must continue with a Sequel now that Chuck and Sarah have reunited. please continue.

Cliffhanger? Not good... But great action :)

Hey I remember this now... Good chapter, more please.

Interesting Chapter. I loved how Chuck found out what the Ares Key does. I loved the plan to do a double cross on the ring operative. Please continue.

Okay, now wait a minute. In CH 1 you said Chuck had the Intersect removed for good. Then in CH2 it appeared that he had some serious skills and I wondered about how. Now you say his Intersect kicked in and he translated the Japanese. I'm confused. Did I miss something?

Anyway, the threat of the Ares Key is very disconcerting and will these thugs will prove to be quite a challenge for this new team. Looking forward to seeing where you go with this.

Thanks for sharing.

Interesting team you've assembled here.

Reading on...

Good chapter as this story continues to develop. Hopefully it won't be six months to the next installment lol.

Good chapter but when are we getting bad Chuck? Is he ever going to find out who killed Ellie and Awesome?

Hopefully you will be able to update sooner.

I loved this chapter. I loved how Chuck was recruited by the mysterious Albert Newton. I loved how Chuck is reunited with John and Alex. Please continue.

Interesting story. Please continue.

Ok I'm interested in seeing where this is going, also if your planning on bringing Sarah back (which I don't mind) but she has a lot to answer for, don't let her off the hook with only an I'm sorry. Please update soon.