This was a very nice read. I really like the subtle comparisons you made between Bryan and the snake. :)

Its a wonderful metaphor, and you compare the traits so well that i have no problem relating Bryan to the snake. The story is a bit abstract, making it a little difficult to understand what it is about, but i think that any fan of Bryan would immediatly understand the relation of traits.

Well done ;)

This fic was good to read. You described Bryan's thoughts very well

Wow, Ishy! So descriptive! I really liked it. The plot and the word choice made it worthwhile! :D You should write more one-shots/stories like this!

I feel like I should offer you some sort of tip, though, so that this review can't be called useless. xD

I'm pretty sure that:

'This is all I could do for you buddy.', Bryan whispered...

should be

'This is all I could do for you, buddy,' Bryan whispered...

You don't have to change it though. Just pointing it out! :)