this is so fluffy
the story is really good and interesting

cute! )

LOVED IT!

aww so adorable! Just one little thing i noticed... The last line where it says "But that was after he thought about the money his young Water Tribe fiancé must have cost him." the phrasing is a bit awkward... perhaps it could have been "That was until he thought about the amount of money..." or something of that ilk because if you were to say that sentence aloud it wouldn't sound grammatically correct... :) perhaps I'm wrong (since I dont write a lot) but it didn't quite flow as right.. BUT STILL it was a good piece of fluff to read!

Very nice story indeed. Everyone is in character, and everything was beautifully described.

You've got talent! Great job.

This is a really sweet little story, and all the characters were easily recognisable. :)

Sokka's two birthday gifts were each great ideas, although I have to say that Toph's gift to Zuko was actually my favourite (well, assuming that she didn't actually poison it of course!). :D