You, you updated! OMG. I was so happy when I saw the email. I actually saw in the morning before I left for school and I was so excited about it that I read it on the way to school...and I walk to school.

So, you know I could have gotten killed or hit by a car, but I didn't really care. (:

Aah, you're so lucky finals are over! I still have a month to go before exams.

Anyways, about the chapter, I loved it as usual. You have a nice writing style. There's proper buildup and everything. Nothing happens on the spur of the moment.

Hopefully you will update soon! (:

This is so good! Man, it's like I could smell Eric's cologne too! I love your writing, please continue!

more!

more please!

please write another chapter

i really like it but i think you could maybe develop the story even more by writing a few more chapters. You could base one of your stories on the election episodes. You could focus on the fact that Eric doesn't vote for Victoria and also how Eric would react to Victoria being the vice president for Teddy

awsome story i love it please do contuinue.
J.B

I love your story! I'm happy that some people made What's up Warthogs stories cause it's my favorite show! I'm in the middle of writing one too, I hope you will look it up. Anyways, I love I you rewrited those two episodes and I beg you to make more WUW stories!
-My ;)

Oh my god this is sooooo cute :D please write more :D

Love this! When are you gonna update it?

-L.B.P.

:D Keep going!

-L.B.P.

i love it :D update

this is a cute story

Seaweed! Okay, so that word was supposed to be 'Awwwwww' except that auto correct changed it to Seaweed. And yeah...

Anyway, I absolutely loved this new chapter! It was SO cute yet so Eric and Victoria like. ;)

I loved their whole fighting sequence, and I believe that Eric is starting to fall for Victoria if he hasn't already.

The story of Eric saving was nice, it gave some sort of depth to their relationship. (: And Teddy is really annoying me! I mean, seriously dude, did mommy lock you up in the basement when you were a kid. He's one creepy person.

Anyways, continue writing, and the story is progressing well! (:

This section is as silent and as dead as a graveyard. Yet sometimes, wonderful people, such as you, post your even more wonderful stories, and it just makes me so happy! (:

I absolutely loved your alternate version, and I think that you should definitely write more stories for the Eric/Victoria pairing.

The characterization was perfect! Eric's slightly protective demeanor of Victoria was a great touch. And I think that whether you're in love with someone or not, if you know them as long as Eric has known Victoria for, you naturally feel protective about them. Even then...

The part where Eric gave her Italian pet names while she stuck with the regular, embarrassing English ones. That was so lovely! (:

Favorite line: "She could swear she heard him mumble dolcezza between kisses." There's something so painfully sweet (Sorry, for repeating words, my vocabulary has kind of evaded me...) about that one line. GAAAH! I'm going to go crazy thinking about it. Thanks. ;P

All in all, you should definitely write more! If not anyone, then I'll definitely read it and review every chapter. But I'm not going to make any promises, because I suck at keeping them. (: