|Reviews for Teketeke 3|
| Killuminati 6/4/13 . chapter 17
This story was fantastic, definitely one of your better stories. However, I have one problem with it, and that's Jurina. Don't get me wrong, I like what her character added to the story but I felt that she came and went too quick. She was easily the most interesting character out of everyone, but she turned to the dark side too quickly because she there wasn't a lot of time for her to develop. It would've been better if you had introduced her in the beginning of the story with the other characters so we could see more of her and get to know her better. But other than that, everything was well done and this is my favorite story in the series.
| bekbekah92 3/28/13 . chapter 3
I love the story so full of suspence
| Super lazer ninja 12 3/28/13 . chapter 17
yes teketeke 4 ftw also can you please add geno and mallow in teketeke 4 and maybe some non-mario characters like sonic because that would be awsome
| Spike Brigadier 1/3/13 . chapter 17
Nice job on this! As for the six questions, I'd say Bowser and Gus were actually my favorite characters. I didn't like Daisy, Flurrie, Hunter, Jurina, or Jojora. I thought the smartest character was Mario. He kept his head mostly. The dumbest character was Lakiliku. Dumbass bitch. :P
Sequel? I didn't like Jurina enough for her to star in a sequel, but I like your work, so... Up to you! :)
| Owen96 12/20/12 . chapter 17
This fic was great! The last part was strange, but good all the same.
3. Shy Guy
4. Goombella, I guess. (I forgot)
6. I don't know really. This series was really good, but I'd say the ending for this chapter should be the ending of the series. I don't mean it as a bad thing, it's just there is hardly any characters left.
Once again, awesome fic.
| Light Speed508 12/19/12 . chapter 17
Aw, it ended! Well, here are the answer's:
1. Bowser. Even though he only came in during this story, I still felt really bad for him when his kids died.
2. Jurina. She appeared to be a new hero, but she back stabbed them in the end.
3. Ooh, tough one. Jojora. I've really come to like her and I was sad to see her die.
4. Hmm, I've gotta say... Daisy. Even though she was, well, insane, she was still the best leader and the smartest.
5. Jurina. For trusting the baddies, that makes her the dumbest in my opinion.
And finally, 6. YES. Even though she was a bad guy, I would like to see one following her.
And that's it. Hope you make a sequel!
| Princess Toady 12/19/12 . chapter 17
Well, that was truly a great read and I guess everything hasn't ended yet... Though, for some reason I kind of wish it would stay that way. I'm going to take you little questionnaire now.
1. Who was your favorite character? I liked Flurrie, she was awesome thoughout the story, but Mario is also a character that I really liked as well.
2. What was your least favorite?
Lakilulu and Lakilester. They both SUCK. XD
3. Which character did you NOT want to die?
Jojora. It sucks she died becasue she wasn't with the others, she was so close to living too...
4. Who was the smartest character?
Hands down Mario. I've always seen him as the smart and collected guy who could make great use of his brain, and this series show exactly this side of him, which was another factor why I really enjoyed it.
5. Who was the dumbest character?
Lakilester. Why would you pick up a random scythe that's in the wood ? You'd have to be pretty dumb.
6. Would you like to see another sequel to the Teketeke series?
I know it might surprise you, but the scythe is gone, the spirit of Teketeke is at ease, why would we need yet another sequel ? It's not that I don't enjoy the series, but at this point I'm fine with this ending. Four survivors, a murderer in a coma. I don't feel it's necessary to write Teketeke 4, you've used plenty of stuff thoughout the three fictions and I truly have a hard time imagining how you're going to put everything in place to create the fourth installment of Teketeke.
Plus it wouldn't really be Teketeke.
Also, wouldn't you want to do something else now that you're done with this trilogy ? I mean, I'll obviously read the next installment if you ever write it, but you have to know yourself if you really want to go though this. Maybe you have other projects ? Or new things you would like to try out ? Or even new plots ? Plus, all good things have an end.
In short : you decide. XD
| BoomShroom 12/19/12 . chapter 17
Great ending! Man, I loved this story! Unlike the previous Teketekes, you sort of built up to the deaths and added more tension in this one. Instead of the deaths spread out over the story, it was more like one big blood bath at the end, something that would really affect the readers who had grown attached to the victims. Good job!
The part at the end where Daisy was hallucinating was excellent. Truly shows that
she didn't survive without paying a heavy price; her sanity.
As for the questions, here are my answers!
1. Mario. He was a good leader, and pretty smart.
2. Lakilu. I'm sorry, but she was just annoying.
3. Goombella. She had made it so far, and then got killed by Gus. Her or Bombette. Died alone and unaccounted for. Poor girl.
4. Jurina. At least, she was pretty smart until the end.
5. Can't decide who the dumbest was. Either a lot of people were smart, or they were stupid. No middleground.
As for a sequel, yeah, I guess a Teketeke 4 might be cool, but I don't want it to keep carrying on for too long. After a couple dozen sequels, stories tend to lose their charm, and I doubt even Mario and Daisy, the most likely to survive out of anyone, would realistically make it too much further. Though I would be interested in seeing more of the Jurina aspect, I think Teketeke 4 should be the last of the series.
However, if you have another series of stories, that might be good. Always nice to have fresh, interesting stories! Especially ones like this, where the real deaths don't happen until further in after you start to like some of the characters.
Anyways, great job with this fic, and keep writing!
| Moley Koopa 12/19/12 . chapter 17
My favorite is Kooper, least favorite is Gus, I don't want Kooper to die, the smartest is Daisy, the dumbest is Parakarry even though he's one of my favorites. I would LOVE to see a Teketeke 4! This is a great horror fic that suits my taste!
| FireCloud39000 12/14/12 . chapter 16
Hunter let himself go over these months...hes off his game,he cant go down THAT easy...right?
| FairHairedAdventureSeeker 12/10/12 . chapter 16
wow! Can't wait for the next chapter! And your next story for that matter!
| BoomShroom 12/9/12 . chapter 16
Excellent chapter! Finally, all of the psychos are dead. Too bad that only three people made it, though.
Hunter's death was actually kind of funny since Daisy just ran over him, backed up, and ran over him a few more times for good measure.
I was actually sort of surprised that Goombella died. She made it so far, even before Teketeke 3 and I thought that she would live. Oh well, at least Mario, Bowser, and Daisy, the three I wanted to live, made it out.
Great chapter, and I can't wait to see the finale!
| Moley Koopa 12/9/12 . chapter 16
Oh dear... I was hoping that Kooper would get to live but oh well. Are you going to make a Teketeke 4?
| Princess Toady 12/9/12 . chapter 16
I cringed at Goombella's death and was extremely happy about Tiny's. :p
I'm also glad Gus died, I really didn't like him at all, Jurina kind of had it coming. What, she really thought she could take on THE Mario ? I'm glad the party eventually managed to get rid of the three killer. I laughed at Hunter's death, I think I'm starting to become a little insane, lol.
But I doubt this is the end of the story yet, what will happen to the scythe ? Will Mario, Daisy, Bowser and Flurrie reach the hospital safe and sound ?
Jojora's death was the worst, I think. I mean, she was so close to living and ultimately died...
But all in all Tiny died so it must be the end of the story since she was the main antagonist. Still, I wouldn't be surprised if someone picked up the scythe and started the killings again, or if ended your story with someone spotting the weapon and taking it home. It would be a great end though.
Good luck with your final chapter and thanks for your explanation about the scythe.
| Light Speed508 12/9/12 . chapter 16
...Wow. Looks like it isn't the end of Teketeke just yet. 1 more chapter to go, maybe?