Doctor Who meets Kim Possible. I'd always wondered about what would happen :) should be interesting.
-Kate

This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.

OOOOOOOHHHH! Yayayayayay!

Awesome! I am absolutely loving this story as I have just read Devil in the White City. This is very much like it, and is very well fleshed out, for such a short time into the book. And I just realized who "Frank" is! To think Kimmy might have planted the seeds of Oz in Frank L Baums mind... Mind blowing. WOOOOW!

OH MY GOD! I LOVE YOU! I never thought of combining Dr Who with KP! AND I LOVE LOVE IT! OH MY GOD!

May you keep writing such amazing stories!

So as part 1 concludes, Team Possible and a few Time Lords go in search of an evil Empath escaping into the past. If the directions given were a little different, I'd suspect the villain might be heading for Middleton and Mim Possible. But on second thought, the Civil War could be his target... We shall see.

Wonderful story, I shall look forward to your next installment!

MA

Some nice action as Kim and Ron do what they always do to save the day. But the Doctor warns them about the consequences of possibly changing history, even to the point of accidentally erasing themselves from history. But it goes against everything that Kim is to see innocent people about to perish, and yet do nothing.

But who's this mysterious man who's looking on? I'd be tempted to say Sensei, but...

Well, quickly on to the next chapter!

MA

First of all, I must say I really enjoyed this story and I am looking forward to seeing the sequel to this later on down the line.

Now you surprised me there with the Empath, I wasn't expecting that. Now a chase through time and space to get the stolen TARDIS is going to be fun and the Doctor and Team Possible look set to encounter classic foes. I know most stories have set up Daleks and Cybermen which Kim contends with but I want to see something more classic.

I reckon you throw in a few alien species such as The Voord, The Sensorites, or if you do decide to have the Daleks in a story, throw in the Mechanoids for good measure. I still recall watching a few of the old William Hartnell Doctor Who adventures when the BBC broadcasted episodes of them back in the 90's.

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I wonder when this is over if Kim, Ron and Rufus will remember all they have seen and taken part in?

But now a mission whose outcome could change Earth's history is coming.

Hope they can pull this off with the Doctor.

CB73

Some tough realities faced by Kim and Ron here. Change History or save lives.

Tough call, but it had to be made.

Now to see who is out of place just behind that crowd.

CB73

Ooh, time paradoxes always make my brain hurt, especially after trying to make sense of all those Star Trek episodes and their infinite permutations. Come to think of it, I wonder if Rufus might end up being a time lord himself from some distant alternate reality future... And best wishes to our heroes as they rush into that burning building!

MA

So another Time Lord is nearby then? I'm going to take a wild guess and say it might be The Master, a classic foe of The Doctor. But I could be wrong there, so maybe it could be Rani or for a few laughs The Meddleing Monk.

Now with Kim and Ron going mission mode, there might be a risk of them changing the course of history...or maybe set in motion events that were supposed to happen. We'll see until next time then.

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A mystery within a mystery of Drax's visit that the Doctor just can't fathom. Wonder what will come of that, and if a third Time Lord is in the vicinity...

Now about that fire that Kim and Ron just rushed into...

CB73

This chapter brought back a few memories. Interesting that "In a Persian Market" was one of the first pieces of classical music I heard as a child, on a Arthur Fiedler/Boston Pops album. (Yes, they called them albums back then...) And I saw Locomotive 999 when it was still displayed outside the Museum of Science and Industry, back in... well, I'd rather not say. (But frankly I was more fascinated by the U-505, and the Stuka which hung from the museum's ceiling.) Looking forward to the next gems you drop our way.

MA

Another pleasant chapter, as we discover Kim Possible's accidental influence on L. Frank Baum. Funny though, that I don't remember ever seeing Shego in the Wizard of Oz. But if I had, I fear that tale would have had a much different ending...

MA