|Reviews for TCOT Envious Enemy|
| Captain Weirdo 9/15/12 . chapter 16
Great ending! Love the touches of humor. Well done!
| Guest 9/15/12 . chapter 16
Loved this story from beginning to end! Please continue writing about the "older" Perry and Della. I'm always happy when they're happy.
| Michelle Weiner 9/14/12 . chapter 16
This was a great story! Each chapter kept me on the edge of my seat and the ending was wonderful and then that epilogue...just like it should be. What a treat.
Can't wait for another story...well done :)
| BTA 9/14/12 . chapter 16
Great job with the story, I enjoyed it very much. Good job with the characters. Please continue writing, I enjoy your stories very much!
| kaleen1212 9/14/12 . chapter 16
I enjoyed this story very much. Look forward to more from you.
| tengland2 9/14/12 . chapter 16
Glad things are all worked out for them. Bank had no problem him into her account or her into his. Been doing it to long. Didn't think it would be long before they somehow got involved with Ken's case. Right back where they belong with each other and their job(s). :) THANKS
| Laura 9/14/12 . chapter 15
I like how you used so many of the 80s characters. It's also interesting to see your different take on my fave couple and their life together. D couldn't have kids?! I hope you just made that up coz that'd be too dramatic for me. I always trhought it was her choice to not marry P (bookverse at least), that she was a woman of her own like that. Too much drama in gen for me, but some awesome little ideas and scenes in-between.
| Captain Weirdo 9/13/12 . chapter 15
All this and an epilogue too? Score for us!
I enjoyed Brock in this chapter. :)
| kaleen1212 9/13/12 . chapter 15
Great story. I look forward to the epilogue!
| tengland2 9/13/12 . chapter 15
At least its over with as far as Jennifer is concerned. Answer to where Della's rings were as well. Now to get rid of Brock, his men, Amy, Ken and Paul, perhaps P/D can get some privacy back into their lives. Loved P's comment about home being where D was. Glad their all safe.
| Guest 9/10/12 . chapter 1
OK, now what's going on?..this is great stuff!
| Michelle Weiner 9/8/12 . chapter 14
Finally...Della and Perry back home and all is well...but is it? The ending says something else. I loved this chapter, especially the romance but now there's trouble again...Hope they take of it quickly so they can go back to their normal everyday life.
| kaleen1212 9/9/12 . chapter 14
Ut oh, more trouble. This has been a great story from the beginning and you are not finished yet. I will eagerly await your next update.
| Captain Weirdo 9/8/12 . chapter 14
Oh man - what could be wrong now!? :)
| tengland2 9/8/12 . chapter 14
So much for a quiet night together. Although everyone is concerned about P/D and tired themselves. Short conversation with Brock, then went to Della. Loved Paul and Ken trying to explain why they weren't married.
Nice conversation with Paul, telling/asking her if she'd mind being a grandmother.
Loved their time in bed together even if it was 2am and they need to sleep.
Read the last couple of lines several times, keep thinking I've missed something or just having difficulty figuring out whose there with Perry and its not Della.