|Reviews for The Pack Chronicles: Pitch|
| XwinterstormX 1/25/13 . chapter 13
waaah i can't even, omg! Gaah this is amazing!
| PrincessDripDrop 11/5/12 . chapter 13
Sounds good! I really liked it. Can't wait to read more :)
| thebookworm-123 8/27/12 . chapter 13
Whoa! I found TPC a few days ago and haven't been able to stop reading them, they're fantastic! I have already read Kim's and Jared's and I'm so glad there is more of them, I really cant wait for the next chapter (especially with such a cliffhanger of an ending)!
| Emerald 8/26/12 . chapter 13
OMG this is so good, and i can't believe you ended it there. Please update soon!
| Guest 6/30/12 . chapter 1
O.M.G! I love this story and i really hope you update sooon! ; ]
| melissaswilliamore13 6/28/12 . chapter 13
So much in such a tiny amount of words! God, I love how you write!
Ah! You totally have to update soon! I know I say that all the time, but its because I'm always on the edge of my seat, even if sometimes it takes me a while to review:p
Gah! Can't wait for more! C:
| melissaswilliamore13 6/28/12 . chapter 12
D': damn! They were JUST being all happy and mushy!
Gather! Update soon! Please! Before I EXPLODE!
| melissaswilliamore13 6/28/12 . chapter 11
Ah! Your stories give me so much emotional trauma! Lol
I don't even. ..I can't even...where do I start?
Damn you, Jackson! Bless you, Paul! Please stop crying! Ah! I have to go read chapter twelve!
| Guest 6/28/12 . chapter 11
Wow. Just... Wow. I cannot wait for the next update. That was fantastic.
| melissaswilliamore13 6/28/12 . chapter 10
Ah! They both need to see the light! D:
At least she's finally realizing that its definitely possible she's attracted to him
But he feels all unworthy, anf it breaks my heart:c
Ugh! Cannot wait for your update! Lol c:
See ya next chapter c:
| scigeekgirl 6/28/12 . chapter 10
Loving this story so much, and loving all the updates :) Can't wait to see what is next :)
| Guest 6/28/12 . chapter 8
Asdfghkjlmgyfb I'm dying because there aren't
Any more chapters! Update soon! This story is amazing!
| Guest 6/28/12 . chapter 8
OMG! YOU ARE SUCH A GREAT WRITTER! MORE PLEASE! CANT WAiT!
| melissaswilliamore13 6/28/12 . chapter 8
Nice ominous voice, THAT really helps to settle my nerves:p
Gah! Paul! How I love thee! And having this sort of backstory to him now? Brillant!
Everyone kind of makes it seem like he's a piece of trash and stuff, but you didn't do that! Props! ;)
I hope they'll survive. If they didn't, what would I read? D': lol
Okay. Can't wait for chapter 9!
| melissaswilliamore13 6/28/12 . chapter 7
I WANT all of the above! Lol!
Yay! Shout out! That makes me happy c:
I was looking for your update all day, like, no joke:p my sister was at a Build A Bear job interview, and I kept looking at your page:p
As for what I think of Jackson...less charming now, more douchey. You go Jared! Interrupting their moment! I knew he was my favorite for a reason! Haha x)
Ah! And Kim and Emily and YaYa! Dollin her up! How sweet:')
And how she knew the kiss wasn't right? Awesome!
Okay. I'm done rambling. You can go write some more for me now;) lol
It's a shame I don't come out until Heat. I would have been an amazing friend, lol:p