I hope you find the motivation to keep writing this story it is awesome so far and I would love to know what is next

Have 2 agree with previous review. Way 2 much information - totally unnecessary. Won't b reading again.

I think the whole molestation thing is sick and definitely NOT needed. Sick, sick, sick.

good lectures the fellow it is on the inquiry of sue and jack plug

Yes a new update. Good to read that Myles finally showed his kindness towards Lucy. That Myles could be jealous of Dr. McGregor the way the Dr. was towards Lucy in his office.

It was good to read that Myles took Lucy in his arms when they both left the office of the Dr. And how he tried to make an conversation with Lucy in their hotel room.

I defiantly think that Lucy needs to have an good conversation with Myles and explains why she reacted the way she did.

The questions remains was David also ill? Because what is the common factor in those horrible killings?

Please keep the updates coming because I still have some questions and I'm trying to find the answers with the given information.

This is a great start for this story and I can't wait to read more. You've got the characters right on and it is beautifully written. Thanks for sharing this!

Wow, just...wow and please update soon -

That was about a thousand times better than any of the past chapters! Good details, plenty of dialogue, and keeping things interesting. GREAT job, and keep it up!

That was me on the last review for some reason it didn't register me under my name

Good Chaptr very detailed and to the point , although very sad :o( keep up the great work and please update soon your stories are very good!

So sad that the family fell apart because of the disaperance of Emily. I can understand the fact that each of them is blaming her/his self. Although words are not sufficient enough to describe the hurt and loss of this family, I hope that the team can nail the ... Who is responsible for those crimes.

Curious what the rest found. Perhaps a common ground could be the fact that Emily had MD and perhaps in the twisted mind of the killer she was not " perfect" due to her illness.

to go on I feel like connaitre suite

i like your story...but it seems to be kind of flat. add some flare, details, don't just have dialogue. but, i did love the little moment right at the end! ;]

very good history to go on

Great, a new update. I'm just curious how the things will turn out. I liked the fact how the team reacted (Myles and Bobby particularly) on the fact that Tara had created a new program to get the right questions asked, the fact that the program will be interactive is only a big plus.

I just loved the way how Jack took Sue's hand during take-off. Hopefully they will get the chance to deepen their relationship.

I'm curious who is responsible for those horrified killings of the little is the motive? Hopefully Emerson can create a profile and shed some light on it.

Please keep posting!