Looking forward to an update! Really good!

I loved this story ] I started it and couldnt stop reading it until I finished

OOoh! Yummy! And a unique solution to The First and the prophecy.

Loved this chapter. Please update soon

How dare they? Work? I used to tell my boss that what he paid me was fine for what I did, but they expected me to work, I wanted more money! He usually laughed, at least until I found another job that paid better.

if you'd like a bit of constructive criticism you could more descriptive but you are going in the right direction. Also if you know how to spot a witch from "Buffy the Vampire Slayer" Season 1 Ep. 3 then thats good too also avoid cliches and try to move in a more unexpected light makes the plot more interesting and take over the characters personalities completely sadly i cant tell you exactly what they would say. But remember: original is loved by everyone and so are witty jokes but i do think your work is terrific and i cant wait for Angel and Alix's romance to heat up. Go team Angix

I can't wait for your next chapter to come out. That was an awesome one with the cliffhanger too.

This is good keep going

Great story. I can't wait til you update again