|Reviews for Alix Fray|
| cursedtoearth 4/17/13 . chapter 3
Looking forward to an update! Really good!
| etraxler 1/22/13 . chapter 12
I loved this story ] I started it and couldnt stop reading it until I finished
| mendenbar 11/18/12 . chapter 12
OOoh! Yummy! And a unique solution to The First and the prophecy.
| johansen 8/28/12 . chapter 10
Loved this chapter. Please update soon
| mendenbar 8/21/12 . chapter 9
How dare they? Work? I used to tell my boss that what he paid me was fine for what I did, but they expected me to work, I wanted more money! He usually laughed, at least until I found another job that paid better.
| Person 7/21/12 . chapter 4
if you'd like a bit of constructive criticism you could more descriptive but you are going in the right direction. Also if you know how to spot a witch from "Buffy the Vampire Slayer" Season 1 Ep. 3 then thats good too also avoid cliches and try to move in a more unexpected light makes the plot more interesting and take over the characters personalities completely sadly i cant tell you exactly what they would say. But remember: original is loved by everyone and so are witty jokes but i do think your work is terrific and i cant wait for Angel and Alix's romance to heat up. Go team Angix
| johansen 7/20/12 . chapter 8
I can't wait for your next chapter to come out. That was an awesome one with the cliffhanger too.
| wildcat717 7/16/12 . chapter 6
This is good keep going
| johansen 7/10/12 . chapter 5
Great story. I can't wait til you update again