|Reviews for Spin|
| Beautiful-Tyrant77 4/27/13 . chapter 3
This is best Truth or Dare story that I have seen. I really hope you'll continue because quite frankly the dares and truth are my taste. I've read some with juvenile truth and dares , this is not one of them so I want more.
| FellowNrd 2/16/13 . chapter 3
Sir you are hilarious. Incredibly dirty but Hilarious.
| Thefifthfounder 1/11/13 . chapter 3
I enjoyed reading your story. However, and particularly at the beginning it seemed to set an awful lot of unnecessary detail that you didn't develop further. And at the end the, plot twist of Harry being temporarily impotent seemed unnecessary and not much was made of it. Lastly I was a little confused by the way that you limited the sexualisation of the truth or dare game (bringing in several rules about not overly sexual contact) and then you end up with two characters having anal sex? Which obviously pushed to story in an interesting twist ( up until very near the end I thought it was going to end in a massive orgy).
I'm sure the story makes much more sense to you, and the development of the plot clearly is personal to you as an author, but I would have to say there seemed some very suppressing (and maybe out of place) developments in the story.
That being said, it is very well written - and *much* better than the feeble attempt that I finished a few days ago. I hope you don't take from this, a tone of criticism, but one of constructive feedback.
| gaschalk 11/4/12 . chapter 3
I just got around to reading this fic and enjoyed it. Wondering if it is finished or not? Could be left right here or continued onto one more chapter. It is a good story and thank you for writing another good and enjoyable fic.
| TharzZzDunN 8/31/12 . chapter 3
Nicely done, I loved this story.
| jdboss1 7/29/12 . chapter 3
did not like the ending
| hotflower901 7/25/12 . chapter 3
I do the spanking. I dont get spanked. Damn Ginny and her love potions.
| hotflower901 7/25/12 . chapter 2
Who wants to see Harry's dangly bits?
| Guest 7/20/12 . chapter 3
tonks should be in this one!
| red neo ranger 7/17/12 . chapter 3
loved it keep it up
| c3markh 7/14/12 . chapter 3
Thanks for writing
| Luan Mao 7/13/12 . chapter 3
Pretty good. As a rule I don't like the Truth or Dare plot device because, as Hermione indicates in this story, it's a paper-thin contrivance to get characters into awkward or smutty situations. Here, because you're pretty much breaking the fourth wall in discussing the story's plot device, it's not annoying.
| Odrade 7/13/12 . chapter 1
This is so funny, naughty, and brilliant! Can't wait to read the other chapters. :)))
| Nebresh 7/12/12 . chapter 3
NIce story. Fun idea
| Wonderbee31 7/11/12 . chapter 3
Well, a neat way for this to go here, and enjoyed the payoff for me, which has both Sexy Susan and Hermione comforting Harry there, and enjoyed how it all went with the characters in the end. Well Done!