Nnnoooo PLZ UPDATE!#!##! :)

i really really like this!

oh I just found your story and I think it's brilliant _ I love it and I want you to continue so I shall give you some ideas even if there terrible. Oh but first I love your character she's amazing. Did the fight at Hogwarts happen yet? if so was Linna in it? if she was you can have her tell Embry about it when she starts to feel comfertable around him and you should make Linna and Jasper friends because they both kind of went through the same things, well not really but that would be cool...maybe?

Linna should hate Bella cause she's all winny and stuff (Unless you like her, then just forget I said the last part _) you should also have lord V******** come into this story at some point and have one of the wolves say something like "He doesn't have a nose" or "His ugly" or something funnier because they really don't know how powerful he his only Linna knows that. Hope this helps.

update soon

Alrighty, here we go! So as a writer, I hate when I get writers block (especially for this site). Because then it looks like I've deserted my story and no one is reading it because it has disappeared. So I'm glad you updated because I got to read your story :) it's definitely an interesting concept worth exploring, but the first thing you might want to do is lengthen your chapters. I get hooked on 3K chapters. It excuses long gaps if you get blocked often like myself.

Spend some more time in the next chapter characterizing. Action is important, but we also need to know your OC and Embry (since Meyer did a HORRIBLE job with all of her characters). If you've noticed in Rowling's books there is a lot of history and description weaved into the action... That's what makes it so great (AND LONG!).

As far as Linna and Embry go, Linna knows nothing about La Push or the wolf pack and it's safe to say she doesn't know very much about vampires (just the basics). Have them spend time together, as friends at first. Maybe she can apparate them to places all over the US so he can show her America... It'd be cute. They can be Muggle tourists until maybe her guilt for the war catches up with her and she dives back in just in time for the final battle!

Sorry, I got a little carried away, but feel free to use any ideas and happy writing!

Reena

please write more

Looking forward to your next chapter

I really like this story! Update soon, please? C:

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loving the story update soon please :D x x

LOVE IT! PLEASE UPDATE! *Fangirl squeal*