| Reviews for Sold On Revenge |
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fire-dancer123 6/13/13 . chapter 14I would love to see a futuretake where Edward and family meet Charlie and Renee... I think it could be interesting... Love both this one and its prequel! Keep on writing! |
Cullengirl810 5/30/13 . chapter 5 I just hope that theres another sequel please with an ab-tastic Edward on top? I love this shit so much damn it! |
Cullengirl810 5/30/13 . chapter 2 I love sold into love, I love sold on revenge and I love your style of writing your amazing this is AWESOME I hope there's another sequel. Eeeeppp!:-) |
twilightobession 4/20/13 . chapter 14Loved this whole chapter. I was surprised that when they were in Vegas that after Bella after Edward from the lap dance that the girls went to a regular club. I did not think Bella would ever go back to club with her luck. lol. Loved the wedding, Loved the honeymoon! I am hoping that maybe you would do a future take on all of them with kids. I would love to see how Edward is while Bella is pregnant and how he and the guys are with kids. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us. I have truly enjoyed your writing. |
twilightobession 4/19/13 . chapter 13I just knew that they were going to get married on the beach there were their houses are on the island. I could see a simple ceremony there. Loved Bella giving Edward a lap dance...if that is what you call it. |
twilightobession 4/19/13 . chapter 12You did a fantastic job with this chapter! Loved everything about it. |
twilightobession 4/19/13 . chapter 11Loved this! I am so glad that things seem to be getting back to normal. Hopefully Edward and Bella will be getting back to normal soon too. |
twilightobession 4/19/13 . chapter 10I think he got what he desired! If we were about to do some things like that in real life maybe there would be less violent people in this world. Just saying. |
twilightobession 4/19/13 . chapter 9I am glad that you did not let to much happen to Bella in this chapter. I was glad that she got him with the curling iron. Can't wait to find out what Bella does to Alistair. |
twilightobession 4/19/13 . chapter 8Ok, my question is...Is Ben in with Alistair? It just seems a little funny. Loved the little section about Cheese! lol. |
twilightobession 4/19/13 . chapter 7Edward can be such a dick sometimes. lol. Loved that Edward shot James' dick. LOL! |
twilightobession 4/19/13 . chapter 6I don't blame Bella for wanting more. But really Edward, flipping her over and getting on top of her. How dumb can you get. They need to let HER be on top. BELLA needs to sit on top of Edward and grind on him. She needs to be the one that removes his underwear. She needs to be the one that puts his penis at her entrance and slowly slides down on it. Geesh! They are so slow in the thinking department here. LOL! |
twilightobession 4/19/13 . chapter 5Loved this whole chapter. Glad that Bella and Edward talked about sex. LOVED that she spoke out to Alistair. Loved some Rose and Emmett in this chapter. Another GREAT chapter |
twilightobession 4/19/13 . chapter 4I knew what Edward's reaction would be...to kill Alistair. I am glad that she told him. Glad that they are making small progress. Love that Edward is going to end up loving Cheese as much as Bella does...you watch. lol. |
twilightobession 4/19/13 . chapter 3So happy that Edward is ok and waking up. At the end it said that Bella caught sight of a very angry looking Edward...WHY is he angry? |