Great chapter, I was worried about the update, a long time has passed since the last one but now Im relieved you did it. Im looking forward to know whats next, Im intrigued about those bad guys and what theyre planing.

Hi Jixstun,

Always glad to see an update by you. Thanks for the shootout, I'm happy to have helped.
Before I talk about the content I feel duty-bound to point out it's Sylvio not Slyvio. :-)

I'm glad to see the story progressing but I am getting really curious about the Bad guys now...

All throughout the second half I kept wondering when Jules and Ana are finally going to 'twig'. Hehehe can't be long now right? Am I right?

Since as you say this was a very exposition sciency chapter not too much to mention on character but I did find it enjoyable nevertheless.

One bit of advice I have is to break up the scene changes. At the moment it is a bit of a text wall. You might not have noticed but the program doesn't like double spaces so it removes them. Instead what I use is a line with just three X's in the middle to break it up a bit.

All in all another awesome update whilst I lag behind 'sigh' curse my writers block. Ah well thanks for the update!

Strykeruk out.

I cant believe I red all the chapters without stop (well almost), you are doing a great job with the story. Im looking forward to know what happen next as soon as posible.

Before I've read the chapter I will type this... WHHHEEEEEWWW! NEW CHAPTER! Okay now I will go read the chapter.

Okay so now I have read it. :-) The one important detail that Jules has missed eh... hmmmmm... is it operating the machines? Probably some hefty stuff, or is it maybe making sure no one spots them going into the centre and not coming out? Intriguing.

Once again a really cool chapter. This felt like a filler chapter, which is good since the action in the last story. I can't wait to see how things go tomorrow (In story).

Good luck with next chapter and good Job Jixstun. :D

Strykeruk out.

Hi Jixstun,

Another excellent chapter (as well as another long one) I still have no idea how you manage to write so much lol.
Really enjoying the party atmosphere and the way you're looking at all the birds not just your OCs. I liked the little bit of the chicks dancing and chuckled at Andre's annoyance at Blu.
Quite cool how you give reasons for Luiz sticking around beyond 'He's a friend' especially when he turns out to be usefull. On that note I never liked Juan but now I really don't like Juan, unfortunately I don't think he's the kind of guy to take no for an answer and certainly not the type to take public humiliation which he'll probably pin on Jules. I also have to admit I did not see that attack coming.

Aaaawww love is in the air me thinks ;-) Whilst Jules seems in denial I reckon Ana is falling for him he he he my evidence, she was fuming when she found Juan had hurt him and whilst his comment on her parents made matters worse, I think she'd gone into protection mode. And now they're going to the library alone together, recipe for disaster or romance?

Once again an awesome chapter Jixstun and I eagerly await the next one. :D

Strykeruk out.

Hello Jixstun,

I was feeling down but seeing a new chapter brightened my day so thank you very much. Despite your concerns I think you did an exemplary job with the singing and dancing. I liked your choice of songs especially Guantanamera which seemed very fitting for Rafael. I have to admit to rolling my eyes at this point "If our lives were a movie, this would be the opening credits for sure…Real in Rio!". :-)

The pre-songs chatter was quite funny especially Ingrids incesant chattering and Rickys non-commital responses. I must admit to have become exasperated by Jules seeming blindness to Felipes suggestions but I suppose that could be Jules simply being evasive, who (apart from you) knows.

As I said before a great choice of songs and from the looks of things there's more to come yay! I found it quite nice when Jules and Ana started to feel the beat, It was also funny to see Tulio and Linda having a go at it. It finally seems that JA might finally be bonding...

Good to see you're keeping Luiz invovled even as a story teller hehehe. He certainly seems to see the connection between the two (potential) love-birds.

All in all another amazing and immense chapter, I absolutely cannot wait for the next one. As ever my offer of advice and ideas is open.

Strykeruk out.

Hello again Jixstun and thank you for another great chapter.

I'm loving the banter between everyone involved especiallywhen they contradict I.E. 'They might as well have been going round wearing Placards that read: 'We Are Keeping Blu's Party a Secret From Him. Shhh."' And
"It's not like we're bad at keeping secrets or anything. Blu had no idea about his surprise party did he?"
Loved this.

So Ana's an ambassador eh? Well potentialy. I must congratulate you on that move as I was having a hard time imagining how she and Jules were going to stay together If/when they get together. I find it kinda sweet how Jules is seemingly oblivious to the whole thing but I suspect he might not be and is simply burying himself In work to avoid the issue.

Don't worry about delaying the party a chapter, I am totally cool with whatever you want to do with your fanfic (within reason in other words no insta death for everyone lol). I'm just amazed you're still churning out such massive chapters, mine seem to pale in comparison. You must have a real talent for writing.

But why do you have to leave us on such an evil cliffhanger? It's just so, so...evil! Now my guess is that they are primats of some kind probably marmosets but maybe the leader is a chimp or something what with them supposed to be the smartest animals after humans. Maybe one of them wants to go all Planet of the apes style.

Anyway I am totally syked for the party chapter, cannot wait! I just have one request, If Jules and Ana do go to kiss, let them, even if only for a second before interupting like in the movie. Maybe it could mean they are still confused about their feelings and such later on if they don't get to talk afterwards?

Strykeruk out.

Another great chapter. I really enjoyed character thoughts, expanding their personalities. I just can't wait for the neext chapter - keep up the good work!

When I first bumped into this story I put in on favrites in my web for future... Now I don't know why I hesitated! It is one of the most interesting Rio fanfictions here and it just keeps getting better. Well I decided to review this story because it is one of few that I just can see in my imagination - canon characters are very much in-character, new ones are on par with them and whole world is believable (as for SCI-FI). The only thing I do not understand is lack of reviews for this one - I mean grammar is not perfect, there are few logical mistakes, some may say the story is too quick paced (although I like it more than dragging chapters only for better word-count) but as I say at the begining - this is very good and interesting story! I hope that not-so-many-reviews won't hinder your willl to write and we will all see this fanfic to its grand finale.

P.S. The only thing that was little annoying for me is using "&" rather than "and", but as both mean the same I get used to it :D

Hey Jixstun, another great (and long) chapter.

I like all the issues you've got Jules thinking of, you've clearly thought about it a lot yourself. Many of those issues are things which I hadn't thought about and so it really got me thinking about the deeper mysteries of the universe...0_o

One thing I wonder is how will religious people react or at least fundamentalists and extremists, bearing in mind that Brazil is catholic which tends to be more strict. How will people react to the formula, will they see it as unholy?

Also have you considered animals becoming people? From what I can see the formula is not one way.

Formula aside I'm really enjoying this fanfic and loving how you're developing the characters especially your OC's. I can't wait for the party so bring on the next chapter!

Strykeruk out.

Hey there Jixstun,
another great chapter, i really enjoyed it. I find it amazing how large your chapters are, the ones in my fanfics only amount to around 2,000 words. I love how your fleshing out the characters especially Jules and Ana (i can tell they are starting to like eachother which in my opinion is a good thing).
I really do not like Juan, he is such an annoying bird and i share Ana's satisfaction at seeing him taken down a notch so therefore you got his character spot on :-)
Wait so you don't own Rio they lied to me the dastardly fiends, however i know you're hiding that cat, it's only a matter of time till i find it mwahahaha.
Good luck with keeping writers block at bay and i am looking forward till next chapter and especially the longg awaited party :D SAMBA TIME!

Strykeruk out.

Your doing very well for yourself in this story. I like the depth you have given the characters and the plot seems to flow nicely.

Seeing a another chapter from you always makes my day even better!

I see that Ana is having some thoughts of Jules and what is that book that Ana pulled out of the box I guess I have wait then. Awsome job in the chapter and keep it up!

Nova out!

Congrats on another great chapter.

I'm liking that the birds can use touchscreens even if it seems weird and funny for Ana to be to good at using it.

Really looking forward to the party they are going to have although i get the feeling Juan might be a party pooper.

It seems to me that Ana and Jules like eachother ;-) Enjoying that subtle undercurrent. It might even lead to some complications later on...

Strykeruk out.

Excellent Chapter I really enjoyed it I hope you update in the near future! (:)