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   BestINeverHad 2/19/13 . chapter 23Are you fucking sick?! Messed up in the head r something?! That was just wrong! And the characters are so OOC! What is wrong with yis?! |
| Guest 1/4/13 . chapter 20 This story is amazing but is very poorly structured. When someone is talking you need to have it on different lines. Check some spellings as well. Xx |
| Guest 12/16/12 . chapter 18 When writing speech, put it on separate lines. |
| shun95145 12/18/12 . chapter 18 Great chapter. I love how you bring in old characters and new ones into the story so perfectly. Please update soon, have to find out more about walker and his kid. Also who will be the other couple to get married with Cindy and Tony. |
| Guest 11/14/12 . chapter 15 Omg Can't wait to see what happens next Update! |
| Guest 11/3/12 . chapter 13 Love this! Update soon please, can't wait Your writing is just brill :) |
| PatriciaJessic 11/4/12 . chapter 14 This was better that the last one. |
| shun95145 10/21/12 . chapter 12 Great update. |
| shun95145 10/19/12 . chapter 11 Finally, thought I would it would never ha open, see you John. Great chapter, so much happend that I had to reread it a couple of times to make sure that I got it all. Love the last line where Ste tells Brendan they are going to live together. Please update soon, love this story and all the characters even the ones that I hate. |
| shun95145 10/15/12 . chapter 10 God I really do hate Brendan's dad. I am liking the whole NOBOADY is safe in your story, the mix ups of the rest of the village are a nice addition too. Can't wait for your long chapter. |
| shun95145 10/11/12 . chapter 9 Wow, Brady is so evil. Spin anything and everything to keep Brendan from Ste. I wish people would see how bad he is and save Brendan. I know Brendan is going to get better and when he does I hope all thoes people that Hirt him get what is coming to them. |
| PatriciaJessic 10/9/12 . chapter 8 Very good |
| shun95145 10/9/12 . chapter 8 Great chapter. I real like do like that you have thrown in bits from the show. Makes this world seem more realm. Please update soon, love to read this story and to see where it goes. |
| shun95145 9/25/12 . chapter 7 Love this chapter. Like the twists in the story an that I don't know what is going to happen next. Please update the next chapter soon so I can see what happens with Brendan's nan and fother. |
| shun95145 9/13/12 . chapter 6 Wow, all he'll is braking lose in Hollyoaks. Hope all things starte Tito turn for the better. Before it gets worse. |
