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| Reviews for Honest Liar |
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   i.luv.twilight2 7/9/12 . chapter 5Will Edward's opinion on children be the beginning of the end for this happy couple? Great story! |
| Kgunter34 7/9/12 . chapter 5 Great chapter. |
| jimemon 7/9/12 . chapter 5 I pull the door open too quickly and something comes falling out. I jump and she laughs, until we're both laughing. It's an ironing board. A small ironing board that fits in the wall and I want to give this to her. I want to give her a house with an old ironing board that hides in a cabinet. The sweeter the 'before' the more it hurts the 'now', this whole chapter just upped the hurt a whole lot. Great update :)) |
| Alice's White Rabbit 7/9/12 . chapter 5 This Bella is so endearing and spontaneous- love that about her. How could Edward deny her anything. But, he seems pretty adamant about not having kids- just don't know why he can't say that to Bella :( 'Cause, that seems to be a big part of their downfall (if I'm reading the previous chapters correctly). Thanks! See you next Monday. Sally |
| Guest 7/9/12 . chapter 5 This chapter explains so much. I love the way you're telling it, what should be a happy chapter makes me feel so sad. Brilliant! |
| miss247 7/9/12 . chapter 5 Aww life was good then. :( |
| KLL77 7/9/12 . chapter 5 Wow this is getting intense. Love it! |
| beagle 7/9/12 . chapter 5 This is Meg. I'm on my phone... And I'm kind of in tears because I just love this Edward. I love that Bella has him wrapped around her finger. I love how much he loves her. "She does that thing where she twirls around and the whole world spins with her." You make me not want to write. Ever. That's not fair. |
| slc6548 7/9/12 . chapter 5 He kind of breaks my heart - not sure why at this point but he just does. Good chapter. |
| HollBeth 7/9/12 . chapter 5 Somethings just don't work on sheer optimism, hope and faith. And I'm not even a "glass half empty" kind of person. Optimism with realism, if you will. But Bella...I don't know if she just couldn't see, or chose to ignore. It's sad, so sad - the cracks in the veneer are so evident here. |
| shaz308 7/9/12 . chapter 5 She just really loved him and he seems to have thrown it away. |
| Guest 7/9/12 . chapter 5 This is so good and so sad and I love it. |
| Guest 7/9/12 . chapter 5 This is such a great story! Lovely :) |
| Guest 7/9/12 . chapter 5 so good. I love this Bella. Edward too, but he's more complex. |
| ttharman 7/9/12 . chapter 5 There you go, he doesn't want to be a father ever...I think Edward is scared he will be his father. He can't tell her no, ever, so I wonder how they got to be where they are? Loving this journey... |
