Really good

hey, there! you know, can you add another OC in your story? it could be the new girl in school. I could make a biographu
Name: Rachel
Age:(how old is Ryan by the way? I think he needs some love in there :)
Friends: Sandlot gang and your friends and you
Hobbies: reading, baseball, waterbending(yes she is a waterbender if u heard of avatar)
Personality: shy, smart, not that talkative
Looks: long curly brown hair(not that long), brown eyes
Family: Serena(dead mother), Kyle(father), Charlie(younger brother)
Bio: well, this is how she gets waterbending powers: when she was coming home from school, she went into her house and saw her house burning and her mother-dead in the ashes. then, all of the little water droplets left their, came to her, just like that
can you make a seen where EJ was bullying Rachel and Tommy came up and they repeated the seen of the normal Sandlot 3 version. But, instead after EJ gets tired, pretend that he says to Rachel "at least my mother isnt dead" and she dropps her textbooks and runs off. And Ryan felt very bad. Then, the gang finds her back in the Sandlot and they ask what happened back their and she told them her story. From then on, they became friends. (Can you do it like that please!)

Write some more and you should E.J. in one of the chapters.

Please write more.

Plzzzz update!

update soon love the story and thanks for putting me in the story

UPDATE! I luv this is soooo gooood

i really liked the first story update soon and hey i want my name in the story its jayda

Really good chapter can't wait for the next. keep up the good work