I enjoy non-canon so much! This week was a lot of fun and the flaw-naming part certainly made me chuckle. Maddie does see much, and I am curious as to whether Cogburn sees it too or is he too close to the situation to see or blinded by love/affection for Morrigan to realize all that she keeps to herself? Great chapter. :) I look forward to more.

Excellent cant wait for the next

I love Zevran. So much, especially your rendition of him. He is slightlynot as he was in the game, more of a portector to Maddie than not. What he said to Leliana, whom i have never liked by the way, made me woot and hollar.

I like all the John Wayne references

I like your 'OOC' Alistair. You have a point about a seam-full transition, and you're making it suddle and smooth. (Assuming you're not a virtual germaphobe)*Virtual High-Five* Good job!
Tehe, i really like this fic. You're doing a great job. :)

I appreciate your take on Alistair. I believe you're right that he gains confidence and ability steadily through the game. I like that he's spoken with Morrigan about a way to keep Maddy once he's made king. He's showing that he's thinking ahead, and I enjoy seeing that from him. I look forward to the next update, although I realize that the holiday season can become quite chaotic for many of us.

Aww they are drawing near to that time where Morrigan won't sleep with him anymore. *sighs* It's really sad that Flemeth instilled the beliefs that she did on her. Morrigan could be quite a different person otherwise.

Ummm... why did maddie go away?

Hang in there! It's very good

I like this story. It's sweet. I'll admit I was a tad skeptical with twins and all that... because most of those are over simple children writing. I'm glad to have found an exception.

Yay!
I love this story.

I really loved this chapter, possibly 'cause of cage the elephant... and singing Maddie.. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Naw I love it!

God I love this story

God I love this story