It wasn't bad.

A well nice touching scene of Ben and Hal at the end there. And I wouldn't find it hard to believe if Lourdes actually did dumped half a bottle of rubbing alcohol into his wound on purpose in the show. Pope's a real jerk.

Awesome short story M8

This was really good! You are a really great writer. I hope you add more to this (:

This story was really good! I love Hal and Ben's relationship in the show. They're always butting heads, but they have the other's back when it really counts. Thanks for writing this!

This is great (: seriously, it's fantastic. I were waiting to read something like this. I'm glad it's yours, you have a great potential :3

Write mooore please! I'll be waiting (of course, more Hal/Lourdes, because I loooove that ship, they are so cute)

P.D: Sorry for my bad english :S I'm spanish and I'm in process to learn it yet.