Awesomesauce ;)

I like this

it's a good story I like it

Thats a very interesting story i really look forward for chapter 2
P.S. sorry for my bad english

...Fuck ...to the yeah. WHOOP. EPIC STORY ALERT! Me gusta. e3e xD I seriously love this story so far. Wanna know what would make it even more epic, besides the fact that you should update soon? If this shit were real. WHOOP. It would be SO COOL. Sorry. Mind my creepy love for all things evil. Pffft... I'm a weirdo. xD UPDATE SOON Or else I get Slendy on yew. Speaking of... my friend, during the weekend, was at his grandparents house. There was 5 acres of land there. While he was taking pics... in one of them, Slendy was there. My friend showed me the pic, and after a few seconds of looking at it... I SAWS HEIM. And then I was hyper for the rest of the lunch period. And then a fellow Bro asked me out. AHMEGARD, I DUNNO WUT TO SAY. I never had a bf! QAQ I should stop sharing my problems with random strangers. Pffft... update soon

I'll just tell ye not to expect many reviews cuz there are few people that peek around this parts of the fandom. But if it wasn't so, you would reach the hundreds!

But take this advice: use the enter key more often; click at least TWO times with every paragraph change. It's a pain trying to differentiate which one is which.

(Please forgive my bad english... I'm tired)

O.O curiouser and curiouser...

Honestly, I loved it. There are a few extremely minor spelling errors but other than that, it was amazing. It explains things really well and is extremely detailed. I think you should definitely carry on doing this. Maybe get it published, because I would love to read this book ;)

I can't wait for chapter two! You teased me sooooo badly already just give it to me!
(it sounds dirty lol)