Love this story, more HopexLight fluff please and update more often

Kupo hurry please I wanna read more kupo

This was actually really good, I thought 'hmm this might be good it sounds fun and I need to kill a few hours' so I read it and it actually isn't bad at all and I cant wait for the next update.

Why is it called the poop deck?

Good chapter, I thought since I'm going camping it'll probably be a good idea to catch up with my favourites now. I realise now that it most likely wasn't a good idea to make everyone suspicious of Andrea from the start, that way you could have created more mysteriousness to the story. But I guess you'll write it how you want to write it, but you should take into account things like for future stories.

Awesome! Thnx 4 adding details! :D
... hmm? I wonder what ELSE happened? *take the hint! :)*

Yaya another chapter! but i am seriously dissapointed in the lack of fluff.
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*Chants* GET LIGHT DRUNK! GET LIGHT DRUNK! GET LIGHT DRUNK! GET LIGHT DRUNK! XD
I'm lovin' dis story, man! KEEP GOIN'! CHYA!

Great story, I wonder what they'll have to do to get the next letter :D I'm also curious as to the location of the bomb, cause personally I'd stick that shit on the engines

Awesome keep updating

Lol. I'm loving this story so far. I'm completely guessing this is Serah's plan to get Lightning and Hope together. Because that would just be so much like her.

You've written an alright chapter here, it seemed so small compared to the last one I read tonight, but this is by any standards a chapter on the short side and the other chapter I read easily reached 10,000. Fang and Vanille were aliens, it was awesome!

Okay, solid start. I advise staying away from uncommon acronyms like C.B.F. The flow was going so nicely and then- WHOA! What does that mean? Hang on a sec guys, I need to check Urban Dictionary. Otherwise, there aren't any glaring problems, for fanfic anyway. BTW, I did come for the LightiningHope WAFF.

Keep the chapters coming, technicly i don't really the movie titanic but if it has the final fantasy XIII cast like this maybe

The page was going kinda screwy on me when I was trying to read this, I don't know how to explain it, but it made it annoying to read.
Hey the part about Snow and Fang getting into fights when they were drunk, did you steal that off me? Sam's going to kill your readers, she's jealous of all those lovely hits and reviews. She tries so hard and to no avail. I only think I do when it comes to DL and Wings. You are a good writer, I'll give you that, and the plots are good, but because of how you rush them like you do you may as well have a shitty plot. you know I'm not trying to be mean or nothing so you've no right to yell at me later for this. Oh and I know that you said to Sam that no-one likes criticism, but this isn't criticism now is it? It's constructive criticism, something a young writer needs so they can improve. PS, promote my stories like a good friend, and you can't ask me to do the same because yours are popular.

Serah Villiers Valentine