Hurry hurry hurry! Continue continue continue!

Aww come on, Daniel! Not cool!

Love the story, by the way. Can't wait to read the rest!

You need to continue! It is soo good. i LOVE IT!
brynlee

I love your story! Can't wait for more!

Greetz Mikay ;-)

I love your fanfic so much!:) can you have luce and Daniel back together fighting lucifer?

Please write more! Please, please, pleaseeeeee!
Your story is really really good. So... WILL YOU? :o?

Go Arri! YAY! You brought her back!

Hi, I wanted to ask if this takes would take place after the exactly same plots and moments cause, ahem, Dee kinda died...

I'm just asking so maybe you can say that this would a bit different from the book. Unless Dee came back which is unlikely. But still. Maybe you can saw something when you start the fanfic.

Love this! Luce fighting completely on her own and even fighting a friend! As much as I hate to say it, I'm glad you added that in because it's kind of like Francesca and Steven. They love each other but they're not afraid to fight for what they want/believe, and that takes a special type of courage. Good job!

Keep writing I just think that in the end Luce and Daniel should be together

I loved this chapter. Really, really loved it. You're right that her independence isn't shown much, but you've done it justice here.
The extract from the poem was a nice touch, too. Well done with that.
I'm curious to know about Roland's change of heart, but I suppose time will tell.
Update soon please. (: (Or at least try not to keep us waiting for too long, hahaha.)

I like it u should keep writing. You should have danial and her end up together in the end

Keep writing I love it but she should end up with danial in the end

Can't wait for the next chapter I thought Roland was on luce and Daniels side?

What? Why is Roland in Lucifer's side? I thought he was in Daniel's side! :(