Story is pretty good so far. I like the having a twin thing makes it pretty funny. Update soon yea?

Wow this surprisingly good for a story that's so OOC. You do have a lot of misspelled words though, I think most of them accidentally got their letters switched. I like Kazumi, he fits in well with the other Zweilt personality wise. I like the fact that you gave Yuki such an unusual background, it's cool. Plus having Yuki and Kazumi together is cute! Pretty good job so far, I can't wait to see what happens next!

great start can't wait for more.

Sound really interesting! Give us more! ;)

nice chapter

love the story so far

This sounds interesting :) I hope u update :)

I love your story

I like it! **