It is probably super late to be posting a review to this chapter but whatever. First off, awesome chapter, as always. A fwe mistakes here and there but awesome still. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
I just started watching Bleach, and Fullmetal Alchemist. It is awesomeness.
Please update soon. Laters!

DANG IT i really wanted my OC to be in the story :) well use it in your next book plz

awsome we can post our own charectors COOOL

name mike
gender male
aperence. : depends on mood usely camo stuff
world hyrule
powers : elemancy I.E fire water electricty etc and enrgy beams I.E kamehameha hyper beam also uses sword
final smash. element smash channels the power of the elements into his sword then dose a move resembling meta knights side specail. and drive throught the enamys. also trigers form change. in his other form he uses a sword and bow on his back and is ninaj like final smash in this form is arow of life with majorly heals allies also triger a form change to form shown above.
personality funny laid back (kinda like sora) but when the moment comes he comes through
no crush he just really looks up to the peps from super smash bros brawl

sorry if it's wordy im VERY creative

I'm still happy to see that Jimmy Joe is still holding up. Looks like he met Fang. Wonder how this will go...

I find it ironic that Blaze met Dark and Rio. Princess Blaziken and I are friends.
As usual, your chapter was amazing! :)

Nice chappy. I think you're really good! I like your length of the chapters, too. I think it's pretty awesome how you introduce the OCs. Unlike me, who always has trouble introducing 'em. :P

Could always stockpile them. If you have all the OCs it shouldn't be a problem. I like where this is heading, keeo it up!

THIS IS CREEPY. I WQS JUST THINKING TODAY, "Huh. She hasn't updated in a while..."
School. BLEH. I have to go back to my "Let's-never-shut-up-and-make-LegendOfZeldaFreak-s tay-after-school-becausr-she-told-us-to-shut-it-tr olololol" classmates. Plus we're getting a new math teacher that's supposedly really mean and strct. JOY. Oh, I wish you good luck in your freshman year! (That mad me sound like a stalker...)
Oh! Another creepy fact: you said you might include a Bleach boss and I was JUST watching that show...
Update... um... not soon, I guess... errmmm...

Ooh, I'm with Blaze Temptest... That was unexpected.

I smell a snake... With 8 heads... Or was it a sythe? Meh, if you want my opinion, I thinknit would be cool to see how Nintendo characters act withcharacters like Sly Cooper, Rachet, or Jak around (characters that were made for the same reasons some of the others were, for a story driven platformer, that and I actually love the Jak & Daxter, Sly Cooper, and Rachet & Clank (not so much R&C Future trio, more like Deadlock and back.)

Good Job Em nicely done as always!-Chrissy 8D

Thanks for finally getting Jimmy Joe in here! You caught his character perfectly. 110%! Hope you update soon!

Conic-Why,why most i come in later! Please let me appear next time! Me:O_0. Uh,I think you better put him in,If you value your life! Do it man, for his and my sakes!

(I apologize ahead of time fir any spelling mstakers. I'm on my phone and it's lagging like crazy.)
AH! EVIL CLIFFHANGER OF DOOM! On most PoVs too...
On Green and Leon's part, when Green said something about her proving to him she was just as good as he was, I thought something along the lines of, "Crap, she's gonna get in some sort of trouble..." but didn't"t get in the trouble I thogut she as going to get into. Just ominous message's and creepy flames,LOL.
Ah naw', the ROBs are back... and I have a weird feeling that either Jimmy Joe is going to get into a lot of trouble or meet up with someone else. Just a thought.
Crap, the trio is in trouble. First a dark monster and then you sic Princess Martha on them? THEY BE DOOMED.
Finally, the epic villains appear. They seem evil and mysterious and evil and mysterious... BTW, what poll are you talking about? I'm on the regular site on my mobile but still don't see it. Did you manually turn it to "See on profile" when yo pt it up? I always forget to do that. Update soon!

You already know my vote (it was the most epic of ideas I've had of late). Anyway, cliffhanger! Y u no drop so we can see happenongs of others! Great chapter, keep up these fast updates!