|Reviews for Afterlife|
| tomorrow4eva 4/16/13 . chapter 4
Aw, he knows her so well. A year is more than enough time for her to have a lab. Really enjoyed this story. It was thoughtful and welk done.
| elleelle 11/20/12 . chapter 4
Wow. Amazing & emotional writing!
| Death101- Fox Version 11/2/12 . chapter 4
Nicely done. Sorry I didn't leave a review each chapter but I honestly didn't have anything to say because I think it has all been said. You did an awesome job protraying Vegeta and Bra and the time jumps were well done and easy to understand. Vegeta wondering if he would meet Bulma again was awesome but I loved the comment at the end which basically sums up Bulma's personality. Awesome job!
| Death101- Fox Version 11/2/12 . chapter 1
Oh wow. Nicely done on this. It makes me wonder how Bulma passed and why Trunks isn't really around but I look forward to reading more.
| DrPepper4Ever 7/29/12 . chapter 4
This was a really good story. What I liked about it was that it was straight to the point, but didn't feel rushed or anything. It was really focused around emotions rather than events, which almost made it feel like a long oneshot (and I mean that in a really good way). Anyway, great job. It's an interesting portrayal of Vegeta, one that I haven't really seen that much of here. Usually in stories where he loses Bulma he's very openly grief-stricken, but here he was more in denial or disbelief (the whole business-trip thing), which really made sense.
I think the best thing I can say about this is that I really connected with it. I loved how Vegeta kind of learned a bit from Bra's therapist, though he didn't say much himself. I was worried about the scene with Goku because usually those get all dramatic, but you did a good job with yours. I could totally see the heaven/hell anxiety as being true to his character. The very last bit, one year later, was excellent. It wrapped up the story perfectly.
Amazing work :)
| Basil to Blithe 7/14/12 . chapter 4
D'aww, this was cute.
| Cara2012 7/14/12 . chapter 4
Very sweet ending )
| Royal-Archive 7/9/12 . chapter 3
Right in the ifeels./i
I expected a run of the mill story, and got something that had me crying by the end of it. Didn't even know I was until I felt a tear hit my hand.
I should know better than to expect something run of the mill from you.
Simple, poignant and beautiful.
So glad you put this up.
| Guest 7/9/12 . chapter 3
Oh it's so sweet, I feel all teary! Lovely chapter, I want to read more :)
| Cara2012 7/8/12 . chapter 3
Yay XD they're kind of healing
| Cara2012 7/7/12 . chapter 2
Poor Vegeta, it's rough on him too but Bra just doesn't understand.
| WithoutWingsX 7/5/12 . chapter 2
| Guest 7/4/12 . chapter 2
i'm in a hurry so i only have time to say three words: amazing. keep going :)
| nenelitha123 7/3/12 . chapter 2
so far so good i really like this :)
| Guest 6/29/12 . chapter 1
Pleeeease kept updating :)