I love Vegeta's commentary on the story. Enjoyed reading this.

Daaaawwwwww!
This is so cute!

You depict their bond perfectly. Wow.

x3 x3 x3 so. CUTE xD

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thiswasawesome! I loved it : )

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Aw. This is so cute! The story book creepied me out and because of the language this should really be rated T but other than that, this was awesome. Especially Trunks coming back with an armful of books but I really liked the brief moment in Vegeta's head where he is thinking about the potential his son has. Anyways, awesome job!
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Loooooove it! I really love this type of vegie and trunks story. Warm and soft. Thanks a lot

Oh god, that was adorable. I was smiling the whole way through. Vegeta's story telling skills make me laugh. This is so him.

"Fuck, Trunks, if something like that ever comes at you, you don't give it a chance to speak, you punch it in the face as hard as you can, you hear me?"

I'm still laughing over that line xD. Fantastic work!

Thought this was so cute and that you stayed true to Vegeta's character. I can see him becoming softer with his family after the Buu saga and wanting to do right by Trunks as he was unable to have from his own father. :3

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That is all.

very cute :) great fic

Not bad.

This was so well done! I wholly believe Vegeta cursing in front of his children is canon. (Bulma, too.) Lol. You did a wonderful job fitting the fic to the fanart. :)

Is the fairytale a real story- or based off of an already existing fairytale? I recognize the German word for King in the title (konig); I was just wondering if it was a real story because it sounds like something the Germans would make up. :) Their fairytales are terrifying. Lol.

I had some trouble getting to the picture but this was a great story!

Nice story, although the ending of the book kinda creepy, lol.
And i also have checked the pic
Thank you