This is cute and fun! Hope you update this soon :)

I am really enjoying this! Please keep going! I don't think it's too wordy - description is Good!

I really like this story so far and I am very excited to read more. I love the way you are writing the characters as it pleases every inch of my soul. I am excited for the next halter and can't wait to read it.

Sorry, no ass kicking or criticism here. I do however like the story, and hope to read more soon. I hope the rating gods will be kind and let you write how you want too.

B reading U!

You're doing great Yuki! Keep it up, the you can get Shuu's reward!
Please update soon!
:3

"It was only Friday and nearly half of the attending family members had already arrived, which was no small amount let him tell you, especially when that half was currently crowded in the sitting room just looking at him."

Probably figuring out how to cook and eat him and wondering if the fire pit in the backyard was hot enough.

awwwww, cute. i love this story so far. i can just imagen yuki doing somthing like that for sex! : )

Poor Eiri. You have no idea what's coming to you you poor, insatiable, gullible bastard.

Please don't stop writing Gravitation stories because I love reading them Thank You.

mmmmm... I like this fic :D
I would very much like to read more (but only because of the terrific prose and style and nothing to do with 'the meat'...) hehehehe
But seriously, despite it being M rated yaoi, it is written much better than most of those type of fic (I should know, I have read most of them .)
I hope this review makes you very shiny!
Love love, kiss kiss,
Shizuka Hanabusa
xxx

(P.S. if fanfiction take this down again I promise you that I will never use this site again!)