|Reviews for Past deeds|
| cid lovers 6/18/13 . chapter 32
Ek request hai hm sbi ke..ke plz ap 'Dil sambhalja ja jra' ka end post kre hm wait kr rhe hai plz do it fast . it's an req..
| KamiKaze Me 6/18/13 . chapter 32
well,,,shud i say wht i like most in this chap? :)
"precutns to b taken in the last stage of pregnancy"this line made me to laugh out loudr,,,
nice chap wth lite duo moment as wl as othr mems,,
| Reader 6/17/13 . chapter 32
I liked the overall chapter, the whole chapter was full of fun, masti, liked the teasing part.& i also liked that you gave importance to freddy & vivek,after so many years freddy got his enjoyment about becoming a father,so now vivesha is set to become enagage so it wud be grt to see them,hope to read lots of fun in party chapter. & yes hope you now can bring adisha as soon as possible bcoz i m excited for it.
| Guest 6/17/13 . chapter 32
hey, daya aur akshara have been sidelined... get them together soon. some sizzle between them too..
| cid lovers 6/16/13 . chapter 32
cutest chap yr...itne pyara tha specialy abhi sir reaction,congrats freedy and boss hme aur abhi sir ka birthday party enjoy krna hai plz plz post soon we want to laugh..
| Kdlove-uall 6/16/13 . chapter 32
nd yes Happy for Freddy too...I forget to mention in last msg...
happy to see happiness in his life...waiting or next...
| kdlove-uall 6/16/13 . chapter 32
awwww it was so cute...nd yes u try on duo is gud...nd on Tasha-Vivek too ...
love Abhi-Daya convo -
Abhijit: Oh tho wo Vivek tha jisko meine dekha. Hmm…(punching Daya's tummy playfully) tho badi parchaiy teri hi hogi.
Daya: Arey parchaiy kisi ke b ho sakti hai. Badi hai tho meri h kesi hogi? Hn.
Abhijit(spreading his hands wide): Arey Daya wo kuch jada hi bada tha…..
Daya: Hmpf agar esa tha tho tumhe patha honi chahiye ki wo merihi shadow hogi fir tumne gun sab kyun li….
ha ha love it...
nd wow...Vivek-tasha engaged..gr8888
nd sorry if i hurt u regarding this story in any way :(
want to know about Adisha...update soon...
| Cidian.Me 6/16/13 . chapter 32
i've been reading this story but got no tym to review but now im doing
its going right i love the suprise but yea..! bring ADISHA fast
| Originals143 6/15/13 . chapter 32
Nice one! :) I liked the Vivesha moment the most.
And no need to mention, EAGERLY waiting for Adisha's entry!
Please update fast! :D
| foreverknights28 6/15/13 . chapter 32
I loved the surprise & also the treat :D aur CID serial ke baremain toh pata nhi par tumne yaha dono main events create kar diya, first tho Freddy & manisha becoming parents & second vivesha's engagement :) gud !
So ab shaam ko party hain toh who bhi rocking honi chahiye..aur ussmain humari rockstar Aksh bhi honi chaiye, daya se kaho ki jyada akhde nhi aur askh ko invite kare. but Vivesha ki engagement hogai aur Abhirika abhi bhi slow track par hain :( not fair..& yeh Abhijeet tarika ko kiss baremain bata raha tha?/? & daya kiss surpirse ke baremain baat kar raha tha? aisa lagta hain ki yeh party bohaut zabardast hone waali hain ;)
ab toh bas humari sweet angel ki rah dekh rahe hain hum, unnhe bhi le ijiye jaldi..
Update supper supper soon..
| DF - Daya's girl 6/14/13 . chapter 32
OMG full of fun and excitement
I read it in one gooooo... ufff
Suoer duper like to this chapter
per yeh Abhijeet Tarika se kis ke bareme puch raha tha
Kys Akshara Party me aayegi
or Aadisha ki entry issss sab ka besabrise intjar hai museeeee
| 143CID-AbhiTarika 6/14/13 . chapter 32
OH MY GOD AN AMAZING CHAPTER ONCE AGAIN. This certainly did bring a smile to my face and especially the part where you showed ACPs handsome wrinkles :P anyways update soon.
| foreverknights28 6/11/13 . chapter 31
sorry for late reviewing..
daya & Abhi teasing each other, nice. & yeh kya daya? Aksh ke saath ab catherin se bhi panga leliye? so ab daya toh gaya :P & aur yeh kya jealsous huh? poor daya..& yeh kya vivek ko bhi aks achi lagi? :o acha hua tasha ne rok liya :D & the song slelction by vivesha & freddy for abhirika & daya aksh, perfect hain boss!
& tarika ke kuch batein samjh nhi aayi :( still confuse over adisha..hope next chap main mere cofusion chala jaye :)
aur ab Abhi ko tarika ki actions par shaq hone lage hain, toh ab yeh adisha ki mystery solve ho ajyegi!
wasie ab yeh abhi ke ghar kaun ghus? kahi daya toh nhi?
& aur haan waitng for the surpirse..update super soon..
| Bharti 6/8/13 . chapter 31
Sorry for late ,awsme chapter. But plz now concentrate on adisha n upload soon
| DF - Daya's girl 6/4/13 . chapter 31
very nice movement between Daya and Abhijeet means our DUO
the way Daya fas gaya hahahahaha I was just laughing... hmmmm Abhijeet se chupa rahatha dekha fas gaya na
bacchu... very nice chapter...
I am curious why Tarika is not ready to tell abhijeet... I am sure Abhijeet will accept Adisha... but only because Adisha will not accept Abhi... nahi yaar lets Tarika too a chance...
and Daya so rahai ho ya Aksh ke khayalo me dube ho...
common aapne do dosto ke liye kuch karo bhi abhi