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| Reviews for Powerless |
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   My Chemical Romance's Bandit 3/16/13 . chapter 4Mind if I ask where the rest is? You should keep writing, it's a really good story! |
| My Chemical Romance's Bandit 1/1/13 . chapter 5 UPDATE! I loved this story! You had me hooked! I can't believe poor Alvin got kidnapped, and is being trained to act like an animal, but it's SO engrossing! I just couldn't stop reading! Please update soon! I love this story! |
| alvinnascar5 12/14/12 . chapter 5 Poor Alvin! I'm sad to see him get tortured like this! Dave and Brittany, I hope you save my favorite Chipmunk! |
| chipmunksforlife 12/12/12 . chapter 5 What a prick blight needs his head knocked in I hope Alvin makes it or at least fights back |
| Jace Seville 9/22/12 . chapter 1 Not bad. I love how you managed to get the Live action universe and then give it some great emotion. |
| Kyle k 8/10/12 . chapter 2 Just so know, elinor is spelled Eleanor |
| Jaded1971 8/9/12 . chapter 4 I like this story it has a very good plot. Word of advice though… *Brittany *Eleanor Besides that, you're doing awesome! |
| chipmunksforlife 8/2/12 . chapter 3 I hope alvin makes it out ok |
| Dianne 7/28/12 . chapter 3 ... Importantly, why didn't he call the cops? (sorry, I accidently hit the send button) So, update soon and please help him! -Dianne |
| Dianne 7/28/12 . chapter 3 I can't believe anyon would do that to such an Innocent child! And yes, he is a child! That's how they treat him, and even if he's not a human, you still need to treat him with respect! This is going to break Alvin. He's going to be broken and traumatized for the rest of his life! I don't think he's ever going to be the same. This is going to change everybody's life! I kept readying this over and over again because I didn't believe it was true. I kept thinking I was reading this wrong! And throughout this story, I just wanted to reach into the screen, punch that butt hole in the face, get Alvin out of that cage and bring him home with me, to my house! This he's doing has to be illegal! It has to be! I feel like crying right now! That was one of the saddest things ive ever read! They better get him back! He better not die because of this! How is Dave going to explain this to the others! And more imp |
| Guest 7/15/12 . chapter 2 oh my! |
| Guest 7/15/12 . chapter 1 poor Alvin |
| Dianne 7/12/12 . chapter 2 Uh- oh! This is NOT GOOD! Hasn't Dave ever taught the kids about strangers? When you feel that icky feeling in your gut that something's wrong, most likely something is! I hope Dave and the others can find Dave before something bad happens! By the way- I hope Brittany feels bad about what's happening! It's mostly her fault! You don't talk to people like that, even if you are mad! |
| chipmunksforlife 6/29/12 . chapter 1 Please update soon I like so far can't wait to see what happens next |
| Guest 6/29/12 . chapter 1 I like it pls update soon |
