I love this fanfic

i really love this

I love your story! Great job! Please update soon, this is so dramatic. Please, this can't be 'how it endend'... :)

This story is so adorable :) keep up the good work !

I hate cliffhangers so much.

So you have to update.

Please. Pleaaaaaaaaaase.

Little Miss Sunshine is one of my favourite movies, and I really like the way this is going!

Can't wait for more,

-TC

Aww this is like really cute and I love it. Seriously this is awsome and please continue.

this is good. continue

O.O I did not see that coming!
What happens next? Im dying to know. & Poor Dwayne. x
-Crash Solar X

Aww poor Dwaynie :/ him and all his daddy problems.. anyways great job! loved this chapter :)

This is so good! I can't wait for the next chapter, I've always wanted to know what would have happened if Dwayne hadclose to him on the trip and how their relationship would develop, and you have answered it. Thank you, oh and I rely like your OC :)

Please continue with this. And if you ever run out of ideas just PM I could help you or whatever.
I said it once, I'll say it again. I love this.

I wonder what Frank was doing while they were snogging. Erm. Third wheel alert! Haha x

You think this is a crappy chapter? This is amazing.
I wish I could write like you :3 xx

I can't be bothered loging into my account but I love this. I really really love this.
I wonder what happens next! :) xx

love it :D keep up the good work!