|Reviews for Paper mario : The epic advnture|
| pepsicola56 11/17/12 . chapter 1
One tip I would give you is to use a normal format opposed to this, what I would call,a"crack story format ". Other than that I enjoyed reading this.
| Guest 10/21/12 . chapter 1
| epic mario fan 9/19/12 . chapter 3
this was a short chapter
| The guy 9/16/12 . chapter 3
Sonic speeds up and goes faster than the plane. Sorry I couldn't resist
| Brandon Vortex 8/26/12 . chapter 2
wow,plz continued and ive seen some dragonball reference. again plz continued
| guest 7/10/12 . chapter 2
lol a over 9000 meme. also answer this question? try to spell muk backwards? if you have the answer post right now.
| Guest 7/9/12 . chapter 2
Step 1: Use proper gammar. This fanfiction is hard to read in the state it is in.
Step 2: Be more sparse with the fourth wall abuse. This isn't a Deadpool fanfiction.
Step 3:Use less memes. Self explanatory.
Step 4: Be descriptive. Give descriptions of the characters and locations and at least try to show transition.
Step 5:Try to lengthen your chapters.
That is all.
| Guest 7/5/12 . chapter 2
try making the chapters longer
| king rigby 7/3/12 . chapter 2
why wont anybody give reviews please