|Reviews for Intermission|
| Yammy1983 1/1/13 . chapter 16
| narwhayley 12/11/12 . chapter 16
Again, your little drabbles are so long. I am pretty sure thy are longer than my stories haha. It was fun finishing up Mick's life. Especially with Cassie's family. They were very sweet and understand. I don't wanna think about the relief they all had when they were adopted. And then it was also sad too like Mick's life is. Like Mr. Franklin and then not trusting people. And staying on the streets. The journals were a good idea to hear both Mick's and Beh's thoughts.
And then we have Beth coming to talk to Mick of course. And I am very happy that he didn't flip out that much. Again, I sure would of and my journals just revolve around school and repetitive tasks. Anyways Mick and Beth had a nice talk. I love how you embedded their banter. Made everything seem very natural. Thanks for writing! Hope you continue xP
| narwhayley 12/11/12 . chapter 15
Woah I can't believe Beth broke into Mick's journal. While it seems like something Beth would do, if I were Mick, I would be pissed. I spent the whole chapter in suspense and scared that Mick would walk in right there. But besides that, I really did like the journal entries. They showed a lot about Mick's background and his mindset today. Extremely interesting read. This is my third time reading it haha. The lives of the three of them are sad but still not incredibly unbelievable and stuff. And Beth's reactions to everything was spot on. Like almost kinda wanting to translate it into English and profiling him as she reads everything. Thanks for writing!
| Guest 11/19/12 . chapter 14
quand la suite :) j'adore ;)
| narwhayley 11/17/12 . chapter 14
Heyyyyyy. Awesome chapter again. I mean really, a Mick centric fic about how he likes Gina? I LOVED it xP. And of course written by you, which makes it at least 10.6 times better haha. And it was just so perfect how it just fits awesomely with all your other stories and Mick's personalities on all the other stories. I think you have written more than the actual writers of the show. And I can argue that your work is better too. Anyways all that character analysis stuff about Mick is fun like always. And then meeting Gina and chatting all night. And then incorporating all of your stories and drabbles in there with Mick/Gina fluff. And I just like died. Love all the little details. I don't know why but they really add to the story. Like how how he needed to finish up paper work but kept talking to Gina when they met because they were so captivated w/each other. And how he drove an hour to get ice cream. I liked how you added the dentist thing in like you said. And then how you thought of the drugs to get Mick to talk. And almost techincally maybe admit that he likes her to her face. But yeah, I don't think they are at a place to admit it yet. I love how you said that Mick was going to prove that he was worth the risk covertly. Anyways it seems like I am running out of things to say because I'm always complimenting your work. Well again, awesome (x1,000) chapter! THANK YOU for writing! Hope you continue xP
| RawSon.M 11/16/12 . chapter 13
So much Happy about the Mick centeredness. I love the relationships with everyone and difference between mick and liam and mick and Coop. You know I love your stories! Continue with your brilliance. About to read part 2!
| narwhayley 10/9/12 . chapter 12
Oh gosh this was such as awesome one shot. Poor poor little Mick. I loveeee all the little details and all of his thoughts. And then the thoughts are perfectly alligned with an eight year old Mick too. And some of the lines in this are sooooo sad and perfect. Like how Alis told him to never let to of Jenna's hand. And then I like Ali's too. She is interesting. Gosh I have some predictions of who planned the whole fire. I LOVE how all your stories are connected. It is like mind blowing how awesomely everything goes together. And I seriously can't wait for more. Like in the old days where amazing authors would publish a chapter at a time in newspapers and there would be like cult followings to stories. Anyways Thanks for writing! Hope you continue xP
| narwhayley 9/23/12 . chapter 11
First of all Mick11 I don't know if you read the reviews but the Rubber incident was in Red Cell One. Haha no worries I get my stories mixed up sometimes too. Anyways I love his chapter. Especially the early introductions of Mick and everything. Haha I just love these stories and everything g CMSB you write. Thanks for writing! Hope you continue xP
| narwhayley 9/23/12 . chapter 10
Yay yay yay another drabble haha. I can't even decide what I like more. Your drabbles or your stories haha. I love how you have Prophet such a detailed backstory. Especially because his is sooo complicated and everything. And I like how Cooper randomly pops into all of this. It sounds like him. And you portrayed Prophet awesomely as always. Thanks for writing! Hope you continue xP
| Mick111 9/11/12 . chapter 11
Hey, I change my mind. The last two drabbles have been some of my favourites. It's absolutely brilliant stuff and I'm glad you're pursuing CMSB. The dynamics are what I love and what makes this so great. You look at all three together, Mick and Coop, Coop and Prophet and Prophet and Mick and that's just genius. I love the way Coop is with Mick how he takes care of him and looking at it through Prophets perspective. Another genius thing was Prophet. A focus on him was great; looking from the start. The common ground being music, ladies and gentlemen, I would just like to say is another proof of how music is the King or Queen of the world we live in. The tea thing was cool and how Coop however much he adores Rawson still gets frustrated with things like him sniffing out the tea. Jet-lag was ironically quite funny on Mick. Just quick question, in your first drabble (I think it was yours) it was implied that at the academy for paperwork was the first time Mick and Prophet met with the 'Rubber' incident. I mean I like both, I'm just curious as to whether or not I'm reading incorrectly or if I'm getting my stories mixed up. In no ways am I negatively critiquing you so I certainly hope you don't see it in this way. Again continues on with this pure work of brilliance and never give up, for it truly suits you well. Or rather you suit it well. In ways I'm glad CMSB was cancelled, or else I might not have gotten to read all of this. And its def more Mick and character focused then the show. So thank you.
| narwhayley 8/26/12 . chapter 9
Hello again. Awesome chapter as always. I feel soooooo bad for Mick and Liam. But I like reading all of this at the same time. Gosh you plan so far ahead it is super duper cool. Cant wait until the next chapter! Thanks for writing! Hope you continue xP
| Melanie5629 8/21/12 . chapter 9
whoa, that was...whoa
Thank you! you are really a great author. You've got talent!
| Guest 8/21/12 . chapter 9
quand la suite ;)
| narwhayley 8/16/12 . chapter 8
Yay I'm glad both of them are okay. Their interaction when Mick was hurt was awesome. It makes sense that Mick would want to get up regardless of his injuries and Beth couldn't really stop him because she didn't really know him at the time. And I have to add that this was an awesome mini-case. Really cool with the electricity gun and you are totally right about how dangerous and sci-fiy it could be. So yeah amazingly awesome concept. Loved this drabble and all your other ones. Thanks for writing! Hope you continue xP
| narwhayley 8/16/12 . chapter 7
Hmmm I think the Beth and Mick dynamic is pretty interesting. Haha I barely know anymore because the show ended a year ago but your stories are interesting. I love how Mick is super smart and everything and you kind of gave both of them a small backstory. And then I like how both of them agree that sympathy sucks. It makes sense with their personalities and everything. Awesome chapter! Thanks for writing! Hope you continue xP