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madd09
2008-05-06
ch 30,
abuseamazingly wriiten great plot you deffiently havea great mind
Lost it Never Had it
2008-05-04
ch 2,
abusei really like this story so far, but you work on the layout of it, the letters are all mixed to gether with no clear start and finish between them. but either way, its really good, looking forward to reading the rest of this series.
benlovesHPFF
2008-05-02
ch 1,
abuseso i loved the entire story.
and i read teh next one
but that ones isnt so good
but i liked it.
keep writing
please?
merlinssaggyleft
2008-04-29
ch 1, anon.
abusei'm sorry to say that more often than not i'm classified as a "lurker" - one who reads and doesn't review...that's because i'm fairly picky about the stories i choose...but anyway...i just wanted to drop a line (even though this is an older fic) and let you know that i enjoyed the first chapter immensely...it's 3am where i am and i intend on finishing this story tonight, so...well done, hope to see you again
jayley
2008-04-21
ch 11,
abusegood god, what gave u the idea for moira? i couldn't read what she said at all, i just wanted to read proper english! anyway, while harry's life has not always been easy, u've gotta admit that this year it has been easy for harry. he didn't really have to try for anything, it just came to him. on the other hand, harry also never said anything about those nightmares, so ron can't be blamed for that. and really, harry himself creates those nightmares with his own doubts, otherwise his life would be fairly easy at this point in time. i don't know, but this harry doesn't garner up the normal amount of sympathy from me, partly because harry all the power, etc, too easy, no matter how u put it
jayley
2008-04-21
ch 9,
abusenow there was no reason for all that! harry is just a tad annoying, though technically he does have the power to back it up
Madam Bones
2008-04-05
ch 30, anon.
abuseA wonderful ending for a wonderful story. I loved the whole thing. This was very nice. And, I must say, I am rather proud of myself for reviewing and not just speeding through the entire thing to see what happens. Perhaps my will power is growing stronger, or maybe it was just guilt... ;-)
Anyway, that was a great story. I love strong, powerful, but slightly damaged Harry and I LOVE feisty, powerful, loving Ginny, and I HATE LUCIUS MALFOY SO MUCH. AND DRACO. THE STUPID GIT! Going to be a death eater. Fine, go ahead, Malfoy, but watch your back because Harry has no pity for lousy disgusting vermin. Damnit! I can't wait to read the next installment. The teaser was equal parts terrifying and ridiculous in the size of the cliffie you gave me. Thanks for writing a great story and thanks for completing it, nice plot development, nice relationship development, and nice pranks against the stupid Slytherins! Thanks again.
Always Yours,
~B.~
Madam Bones
2008-04-04
ch 29, anon.
abuseWoah! They can hear each other's thoughts! That's interesting. It's nice, too. It makes what they have seem more real, like a love that's deeper than most. That chapter was...er...interesting. Can you say awkward? I'm not overly sure how Harry managed to get them out of that, or didn't manage... It was a bit confusing, probably because I, quite literally, shut my eyes when Molly and Arthur and the boys and Dumbledore barged into the room. But then it got racy! Whoowhee! Hahaha. I liked this chapter a lot. I wonder what it means for them that they can now read each other's minds. It can probably help a lot in battle, an organic ansible of sorts, but I'm going to bet it's going to influence a lot of their daily lives, too. Is there a way they can shut that off, too, though? I may not have ever been in love like Ginny and Harry are, but if all my thoughts were shared with someone, no matter how much I loved them, I'd bet it would get old pretty darn fast. Anyway, I really really have to go to bed. Goodnight!
Exhaustedly Yours,
~B.~
Madam Bones
2008-04-04
ch 27, anon.
abuseHmm...Ginny in Harry's mind. Interesting. But how come Ginny can go in while the shades, the echoes of the Order members, can't? I wonder what she's going to find in there. It's probably a pretty messed up but beautiful place. If it's even a place, which, judging by the description, however brief, it is. I like the idea of Ginny in Harry's mind. But what is she going to do there? Can she meet mind-Harry? Or does her mere presence influence him to wake up? Or does she have to do something else, to fix something in order to get Harry back in control of his mind. Is there a semi-physical beast, his animagus instinct, that she has to vanquish? I'm interested to know.
Nice chapter. Thanks for another good one!
Yours,
~B.~
Madam Bones
2008-04-04
ch 26, anon.
abuseAn Imperial Arch Griffin. Now that has a ring to it.
Only Harry's animagus transformation would destroy an entire street and then fix it! Hahaha.
I LOVED this chapter. It was almost scary to read, and tiring, in a weird way. Like the whole transformation thing happened and then, when it finally ended, I was drained. Like it had happened to me, in a roundabout way. I liked that.
I really do have to go to bed now, it is getting quite late.
Until Next Time,
~B.~
Madam Bones
2008-04-04
ch 25, anon.
abuseI am having a coronary. My heart is going to give out from palpitations. I have just died a little. What is going on? What is this? I will personally jump into my computer and murder Vernon Dursley, for the record, if he so much as looks at Harry the wrong way again. The little lousy bastard shot Harry. He did, however, wet his pants, which did NOT go unnoticed. A small comfort to me, but a comfort all the same. What is going on in Harry? Presumably, he found a way to NOT crack the planet in two, but he's not really dead. He can't be dead. He. Is. Not. Dead. No way. I refuse to believe it. But where is he? What set off his power? Why did it want to get out? Argh. No more reviewing, more reading. GREAT chapter. I liked how Ginny began to manifest the Order's powers. She's beginning to pick up on their thought more, too. Anyway, thanks for a good one!
Yours,
~B.~
Madam Bones
2008-04-04
ch 24, anon.
abuseWHAT? Did Vernon just pull a gun on Harry? WHAT? And you can check sexual tension off the plot list. Whoowhee! That's a lot of sexual innuendos! For some reason, every time I start to review, I forget what I wanted to say and instead have an undying need to read the next chapter. So off I go!
Nice job on this chappie.
Yours,
~B.~
Madam Bones
2008-04-04
ch 23, anon.
abuseAyayayayay! Harry can't catch a bloody break, can he? Siberia...ha! And pink Severus Snape could be the greatest mental image E. V. E. R. ! I love it! I'm going to keep reading, so this is gonna be a quickie again. Nice job!
Yours, As Always,
~Madam B.~
Madam Bones
2008-04-04
ch 22, anon.
abuseOh, Harry is so cute. Damn you and all the authors like you who create for me the image of such a perfect man. If only...I say this as today, my interaction with members of the male sex was comprised exclusive of a food fight, snorting of course sea salt, and a heated discussion about what would happen if you fed a pigeon Alka-Seltzer (The general consensus was that it would explode, bringing forth a chorus of 'Cool!'s). And then I come home and find this storybook wonderful Harry who is the perfect friend and the perfect man and the perfect lover and I am torn between hopless romanticism and being reduced to tears for the unfairness of it all. ;-)
Anyway, nice chapter. By the way, I meant to say that last chapter I really enjoyed the game of chess with death. It was clever and dramatic and oddly calming at the same time. But of course Harry could beat Death at his own game. I bet Voldemort would have tried to smash the board to bits, and he could NEVER have won. But our little, smart, brave, uber-wonderful Harry wins again. He really does rock. Good chapter. Thanks again for another installment of a great story!
Yours,
~B.~
Madam Bones
2008-04-04
ch 21, anon.
abuseAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
That is the best! I LOVE GRED AND FORGE! I'm glad Harry's up. And I'm glad we finally (**FINALLY**) know Blaise's gender, too. :-)
Nice chapter. I wonder where Moldywart and Co. ended up...
Curiously and Amusedly Yours,
~B.~
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