Wow. This was so deep and amazing, it really fit well with the book. Keep writing!

I love this.. This could actually be portrayed as Margo because of course we don't really know what's going on in her head.. The whole book is on Q and bits of him understand Margo. Yet we don't get the full picture of her so I'd like to think this could be part of it.. I love it and its genius with a bit of darkness yet you played it off well :)

I really like that you have Margo not only pick apart the pieces of Q's perspective of her, but her own perspective of him. The tone is bleak, but introspective, which I think fits the novel well.

One bit of constructive criticism: in the first paragraph, you used "aught" when I think you want "ought."