I really liked this. Although, Jo was OOC, it suits the plot line very well. I hope u can update soon! :)

i loved this chapter. please post the dragon age story!

That was a cute story. i defenintly think you should write more.

Good story but you should continue it for your friends I think they would enjoy it :)

forks'n'spoons: hehe whoops, im new to this so i sent you a PM instead of answering here (which i think is what youre supposed to do...thanks so much for the review, and the rest is in the PM. i appreciate it :D

Oh gawd, this is so sweet I think I'll get caries from this fic, lol. Your fault! I'm gonna sue you if my teeth took any damage from reading this! *death glare* XD lol jk
Well, I never thought of Jo to be the cute, delicate type. I actually like her as the stoic badass she usually is, but this...was something different. In a positive way though. XD The Genocide Angel is sad because she stubbed her toe...I wanna hug her so baaaad! \(TT)/
As for the ages, I think you've got them a little wrong n_n
Sei: 20
Jo: 18
Meg: 16
Amy: 13
At least if I remember correctly...oh well, nevermind. Hope you continue soon n_n

-Spoons

I don't know if this is on purpose but the ages of the persons, except Megs, are wrong
Anyways I like the chapter! It's good and the ooc is not too bad and I like your writing style :) kkeep it up

Well, I quite enjoyed reading this and I'm hoping that you will continue with this fic.
The OOC-ness didn't bother as much as I thought it would, guess that's a good sign :P
So yeah, I really enjoyed it and hope I see an update :)