LOVED IT!

enjoyed the story it was very good

I liked this a lot. I love to see Sara angry, she's so passionate it's wonderful! The only criticism I have isn't to do with the actual wrtiting but maybe you could split it up more with more lines inbetween and much smaller paragraphs because I kept looksing where I was reading! Happy Writing

Sara a woman after my heart. I would have confronted griss, but at his home. I would've just showed up, and put him on blast. I would've invaded his comfort zone. I would demand to know, "what's wrong with me"? Why sofia, why are you two always sitting close, and sharing private conversations? Why have you pushed me away? Treated me like dirt, treated me worse than anyone else in the lab. It wasn't to fluffy. I really enjoyed reading it. I wished that sara would've confronted griss back then on the show.