|Reviews for The Ace, The Queen, and The Two of Hearts|
| kuroko 5/18/13 . chapter 51
i cant wait for the next chapter
| RoadMart 5/17/13 . chapter 51
This was one of the best fanfiction I've read in a long while. Your attention to detail, foreshadowing, and development of all the characters - both OC and canon - was amazingly done. The amount of effort you put into this really shows and made it all the more fun to read. At times it felt a little rushed (which I guess might have been the demand for chapters at the time?) and some chapters left me with a little more to be desired. Still, it wrapped up amazingly and I still want more. Good thing there IS more!
I loved reading this. You'll definitely see me around for the next few. c:
| RoadMart 4/29/13 . chapter 34
I cannot express how impressed I am with this fic. School kept me from reading it for awhile but I realize how much I love it as soon as I started reading again. I think I said it before, but I appreciate all the detail and thought you put into this; it makes it so much more fun to read. Amazing so far, my good sir. I look forward to finishing it soon.
| Guest 4/24/13 . chapter 1
I love this story Can transfer to the BBS/贴吧 in China？
| Joylinda 4/3/13 . chapter 51
Okay okay i dont know if u remember me or not but i use to read ur story. I wasnt getting any emails so i was like let me check and see how the story is going and what do you know your at 51chapters. So now i got to reread the whole thing cause the last chapter i read was only in he 20s. But i was like let me read the last chapter cause curiosity got the better of me. Then i read your ending in the authors note nd my heart drop kuroko dies?! In the second part. I hardly have the heart to read now lol. Serves me right but ill get around to reading it all. So dont be surprise if you see like 20 reviews from me cause im desicating this week to finishing this story
| KainUltima 3/25/13 . chapter 51
I started reading this two days ago and I gotta say I enjoyed the ride. Some things bugged me but in the end it worked out I guess. Looking forward to the sequel. I hope there's as many chapters and plot twists as there are this one.
| RoadMart 3/6/13 . chapter 16
I just wanted to let you know that you're doing a pretty good job on the romance, imo! It sounds convincing enough that I can really make an image of Kuroko holding Misaka like that in my head. Also I appreciate all the detail! I for one am a reader that likes those kinds of things cuz I do them when I write, too. Just wanted to put that out there Still reading and super excited!
| RoadMart 2/26/13 . chapter 12
I absolutely love how much thought and research you've put into this! Chakra, Ito's reasonings for being near the hospital, etc...So well planned! I'm impressed! Can't wait to keep reading!
| RoadMart 2/22/13 . chapter 7
This was pretty interesting. Kuro is a fascinating little thing, and I actually really appreciate this chapter for explanation (since I had no idea what Kuro was, hahah). It makes me excited to see what happens to her.
| RoadMart 2/21/13 . chapter 4
Ahhh this is so good so far! I absolutely love how everything unfolded. Mikoto snapping Kuroko out of the Queen's hold was a little abrupt, but it works, hahah!
I think the only thing I'd recommend is going over the chapters again for a grammar check; some of the punctuation messes with the flow and makes it hard to read.
Otherwise, I loved these first few chapters and am definitely gonna keep reading the rest!
| jade 2/19/13 . chapter 51
good fanfic. I had an heart attack though.
| Lady Poison Dreams 2/11/13 . chapter 49
Wow, but a big wow, and I thought that the preview chapter had been intense, really I don't know what to say: we are about to reach the end of history and the situation is moving in a very dramatic, but Queen doesn't appear yet and that worries me a little.
The first part was too romance and OMG Misaka abused her "new power", I never expected something like that from her (she can be a pervert too 6: ... and I still I can not imagine ) ... seems that Kuroko had planned a very special date ... well if not for the interruption of Saten and Uiharu (nooooooooooooooo, why!? TTxTT) and the "kindness" of Misaka to invite them to join with them, you're a big idiot Misaka how you cannot see what happened here (at the time I had a desire to hit, her how the hell she is so blind sometimes).
Of course the situation always gets worse ... and nothing better than an uneven battle, a situation that didn't benefit Misaka because the enemy was a Teleporter and she was using Saten and Uiharu as shields, to corral Misaka.
Fortunately Shiro and Kuro appeared and together defeated the enemy: Kuro did so brutal in a way, that makes me wonder if indeed this Fic should remain "T" instead of "M" XD.
For a moment I thought the girls discover the truth about Kuro, luckily she escaped after finishing work (causing great fear among friends), so for now the relationship between Misaka and Kuroko isn't in danger, because they really wouldn't be very nice to find out that Kuroko has another personality and she hates Misaka (very creepy, no matter how you see D :)
But I cannot omit the end of the chapter, really a very touching moment (I admit I almost cried when I read it 6 :) and full of revelations. Indeed my mouth fell open with Misaka's words: "it is kind of ridiculous. Were both girls after all." Ehm sorry WHAT?!, because that means Misaka began to see a future married with Kuroko, because that could be interpreted at to read that sentence, that was all that she thought it was ridiculous, because two women cannot have children, hell with that I get to heaven three times ... and finally you killed me with "but if you say you'll find a way then I promise I will do everything in my power to help your dreams come true..."
I have no words to say everything that I loved the chapter, great job girl!
PS: I won't think much about theme of flowers, because you said that you were going to explain later, but I'm curious to know the reason that the Kuro wound healed so fast, it really is because it was not so serious ? Or is there another reason? (You never know with you XD)
PS2: Now I ask you most urgently the epilogue 3
PS3: Another Esper glowing, I guess I should wait to know What is the relationship between the secret organization with the Queen.
| Lady Poison Dreams 2/11/13 . chapter 51
This is the final episode of a trilogy, when I knew about it that really made my day, because I really was left with many questions especially about the purpose of the mysterious men ... but now revealed that they are working for Crowley (wait a second Crowley Aleister Oo ! crap this is a big thing) and looking to do something related to Kakine.
Glad to hear that Kuroko isn't dead ... but something left me intrigued what you said in your final note (she is going to die at the end of the second book?, Interesting, but I've learned that death is not always interpreted so literally 6 :).
Wow Lammington didn't die after tremendous attack, but apparently he and his partner are older than they appear and that leaves me with curiosity, and I think that may be because they are the result of some old experiments and because they come the "other side", because if so, this story has only just begun and that fills me with joy :D.
I'm really excited to start the second book, and I want to know what else you got planned for Kuroko 6:... really I must congratulate you because this story has been wonderful ... I never expected such an advance in the plot and you were so careful to join topic with the original works (such as the issue of skill out, for example) and that speaks highly of you as a writer ... so thank you very much for giving us this excellent work
PS: This is the last time that Queen appear?,
PS2: In the final moment when another woman appears, for a moment I thought it was the companion of Kakine, ehm how she name? ehm I think the people calls her "girl in dress" or something.
PS3: I was very sorry to see Misaka suffering that way, but I don't understand it was that black energy that came from Kuroko's blood.
| Lady Poison Dreams 2/11/13 . chapter 50
I know you said that we shouldn't say bad things, not before reading the two chapters, but like I write a review for each chapter, you'll have to put up with my yelling 3, you really are a bad woman (I'll leave that word because I don't want sound offensive with you), how you have given me a chaotic situation... in one episode, starting Riko mischief, you bastard, he loves to annoy people with such actions ... Fortunately Kuroko is an expert (I say this with great sadness D :) to handle such situations, of course I didn't expect she to do that action against Uiharu and Saten. (Even after you clarify it purpose).
At some point there was a change to Kuro, I guess when he started the "zombie invasion" just to make tremendous revelation to Misaka, hell, I don't expecting that moment was so direct and crude "give options to Misaka" only make her feel bad (I must say that Kuro sometimes likes to talk too XD) lol I know I will sound like a bastard, but I liked the phrase: ” No one dies and all you have to do is suck up your precious little pride” that was a direct blow to Misaka and I loved it, I admit that her actions come to bother me sometimes, despite being the good girl... and it was time to give her a little lesson about humility, so Kuro has my deepest thanks for letting delight with that great moment (well among other comments she says too 6 :).
I can finally know that the whole thing was the Glowing Esper, and see the Queen, after a while, I see technology served to increase her power to break Misaka's electric barrier also cleared much detail when started the "fight", clearing my doubts about the first arc (I knew there was something weird in "that fight" and although Kuro isn't fought with Misaka, she was involved too) as well as certain theories like Queen's powers don't affect Kuro (a point to my 3).
But I didn't expect,to see the "action of Queen", while Kuro is going to attack her ... really never expected that the situation will end so sad and to give "those details" in the right time really moved me (damn I hate you because you make me cry with your personal touches on writing 3). Now I read the last chapter to see how it ends, thanks for the chapter intense, I hate you because you're sooooooooo good with those times.
PS: Ehm I don't know if it's my imagination but ... the Queen was flirting with Kuro at times (she smile her to much and when I hear that she want her like her personal servant make me think weird things XD)
PS2: Kuroko's blood is black?! Why?! D:
| Lady Poison Dreams 2/11/13 . chapter 48
Damn it, you and your chapters long, with action, excitement and ... more * W * (my nose is bleeding 6 :) ..
The first part I hope that was the end of the saga of the use of Capacity Down, after seeing Kuro crush all evil ... the villain must to think: the hell I can not keep using this 3.
I'm very concerned about Kuroko, she is slowly falling into the clutches of Queen, either for brief moments ... but not mean it is not dangerous ... I dying to know how Queen is going to act against Misaka ... I doubt that it's something as cliché and repetitive like sequester Kuroko again (I know you will never disappoint me like that ) ...
Fortunately Kuro could take the body and save the day just in time, and won an extra gift in this adventure (nice grenade launcher), I liked the climax of the situation , when Kuro gives Ritoku a weapon with a decision ... was very solemn.
Of course she passes a crisis and reaches another crisis ... now she has to go to release Misaka from jail, hell all about guardian thing is something very strange (Kuroko is basically Misaka's nanny hahaha XD), good also she release Saten too.
Although could not miss a discussion because of the pride of Misaka, she should just say "thanks for getting me" instead of yelling , I didn't expect was that Kuro was also influenced by Queen (I think my theory was to garbage D:) and respond in a very cold and direct (the pure and holy truth XD, take that Misaka). And that was that: We'll kiss and make up when we get home and then you can say sorry. hehehehe, sorry but that was too direct for me (and it's sooooo easy to misinterpret ) ... just kidding, but I liked the consideration of Kuro to Shiro, after all she is the one who should get the apology.
The part that blew me away was the time to "apologize" and also the explanations ... I cannot believe that the chapter is finished with an intimate moment between them (still I can not believe that Misaka would agree Oo), I was too excited w, well although a little nervous too ... because after this beautiful moment, I have the impression that the atmosphere will fall sharply in the following chapters I can feel it 3.
Excellent chapter girl, you made me very happy!
PS: I still cannot get my head that time so intimate and romantic ... really shows a maturation in the characters
PS2: Ehm ... I have a question, in the future write an epilogue or something with them a few years older (maybe about 17 or 18 years old) to see if it works the method proposed by Kuroko, I say XD