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Aw, I like this chapter. I think it's one of my favorites. I am happy Cole's other side was an act. Wasn't it? Ah, getting the band back together. This is going to be interesting.
*gets giddy*
I want the next chapter pronto!

:) AWESOME I love how you are doing this. Is Rorschach in character? Yes. It's kind of easy to get his character, so don't worry. You're doing fine.

Getting better. I look forward to more.

I think your doing ok writing Rorschach.[Though while he said he was no longer Walter Kovacs, i don't think he said they were different it was established they were different personalities... i'll reread Watchmen just to be safe.]

Doing good!

Looking Good amigo! keep it up the Watchman saga needs continuing.

Interesting, so we might be seeing "mini-Rorschach" join a super team?

Oh this is so awesome. Continue!

Wow, kinda reminds me of those mask movies though, with somebody getting taken over.

But what kinda person decides to gang rape a girl to get back some street cred at high school?! And did i read this wrong, or was trevors FATHER there too? Those creeps deserved everything Rorschach gave them!

Hoo Boy1 What's next?

WHOA! Look out Here comes the new Watchmen!

Nice, will Owl man and Specter have kids

Question... Is it Rorschach talking to her? Just want to know. Anyway, write again soon!

-V

Pretty cool story bro. At first I was iffy, but I'm kinda admiring K now. She's psycho, and kinda, in a reluctant way and is badass. And she could be more. Though, she should probably NOT put on the mask. It seems creepy.

Another fabulous chapter! Can't wait for the next chapter!

-V